Thank God you wrote this story. It seems like a perfect explanation for Susan's absence in the last battle. I remember that I was so angry when I found out that Susan didn't return back to narnia with everyone else but I guess this story makes up for that and gives a valid enough reason. Love the story and also read your sequel! Update the sequel soon!

Such a good story. Cried reading certain parts, crying now thinking about them. Loved it. I always like the stories were Aslan changes those who come to narnia.

This is a great story! I love it!

what happened to peter?

I loved it! So beautifully written and i was so happy n sad at the same time when susan recognised her son... Loved it!

Loved it!

It's sort of freaky how you match these odd bits of lyric and poetry perfectly to your writing. And yet, it's not forced to fit like most songfics (the reason why I avoid them). Truly amazing.

Gosh, this idea is just marvellous. Can't wait to see where this story goes. Your writing is also really good, so yay for me!

You are aware that a kilometer is equal to a thousand meters right? Since you used kilometers during Remus' first meeting with the wolve. I think you ment to have used meters.

I love it as a fan of both Harry and Narnia. my mom read me the Narnia books when I was little and I still have them and get them out to read every now and again. I was wondering if you ever did a sequel as I would love to read it!

I literally cried through parts of it, great job.

I actually distinguish Peter and Wormtail. He became Wormtail when he became a death eater; Peter is who he was before.

OH MY GOSH! when I watched Narnia last night I was thinking of how much they seem like the founders!

LOVED IT. Fantastic job.

Please do a sequel pretty please I read this twice so far really can't wait for the sequel and I the idea of James and Remus being cousins XD!