I loved how real you made these characters and their situation feel. Real. Hopeful. Thank you for writing.

This was a fantastically written story! I was pulling for these two so hard, I think I strained a muscle lol. There were moments where I wasn't sure that ExB would work through it. And Bella was absolutely right at the end about Edward conceding everything to her. I can imagine that, at first, it made for a nice adjustment, but soon it would become trying. I just love your writing.

XOXO Anarchy

Hahahaha this is so stupid that I can’t believe I just wasted more than an hour reading it. Lesson learned. Ugh it’s awful.

Absolutely wonderful! What a breath of fresh air!

Cute story! Thanks for sharing it!

Great story!

Great story! Very realistic too

Such a beautiful story! It's been too long since a story caught my attention like that so thank you for it.
Funny, while reading t your story I constantly saw their daughters as a little actresses playing parts of Rise and Alice in a movie.

This is a beautiful story. Very true, real and touching. I love it and am left hoping they make it. Thank you for sharing!

That was heartbreaking.

awesome little story thanks for sharing ;D

I like it!

You know beautiful, I once said i'd love my daily dose of fiction, that if I wanted real life all I had to do was switching the tv on.
And then I read some authors like you and I simply know that that it's absolutely bs. Reading a story like this makes me feel alive. And hopeful. Always always hopeful. Hopeful that one day all that's wrong will be right.
Thank you. From the bottom of my old sappy heart, thank you for gifting me and all the others here with these precious moments in time where you can cry and laugh with these characters.
I feel like my words won't suffice for all I'm feeling but I hope I could convey some of the emotions running through me in this moment.
Thank you again, thimbles. You are one of the reasons why I read fanfiction, Twilight fiction that is and fight tooth and nails with those who discredit this kind of literature. Pfiff, they don't know what they're talking about.
See you on your next story.

Good story. A very real look at what alcohol does to many people, and how to get help when you finally realize that you are on the path to losing everything you love. Told with compassion and honesty.

Loved this little story, wish there was more.