Ah it really is too bad that you had the shinigami take away all of their love for Naruto. Personally that ruins the whole story for me because he is not being neglected instead the shinigami is literally controlling his life and I have always disliked stories where gods had so much control. It makes everything feel incredibly forced in my opinion and reading through a story where everybody is forced to feel a certain way is just not something I am interested in.

thats a b-rank jutsu?!

It's been over 2 years. You got in over your head when you started changing everything and making Naruto act even more different... Didn't you?

Dude your story is absolutely awesome. I love your story but I feel as if some terrible shit will happen. I mean I fucking cried when the orphans died with how you wrote it so well. So I can't keep reading knowing it will tear my heart apart but its a great story no doubt about it. Keep writing.

ohmygod- my heart hurts
I actually cried.

It is a very good story, although if the lemon is missing with Hisako, hahaha, poor A-kun, he will die of a heart attack when Narutin arrives, I hope you continue soon, a greeting, see you, bye !

I couldn't care less about Tatsuko *sigh*

why do people always give naruto giant swords. just because someone wields a giant sword does not indicate power

So where tf is his sword? He wasted energy using jutsu he didn’t need to

Fine fine just gloss over lee taking off his weights. Sure do that. Not like it’s probably still the most iconic scene in naruto

Water against an ice user?

I love this story...

I really hope it isn't dead.

Please update soon!

I’m pretty sceptical about the “dragon clan” element in this story. I’ve already read this story once and honestly I’d say you messed the canon up too much. It’s definitely a cool concept but I feel that the setting is just too much all over the place and you’ve involved the dragons too heavily in the story because the entire story pretty much revolves around the dragons. It ruins the Narutoverse vibe. Something like this would be better off with Naruto as a crossover character in another universe since this type of thing pretty much destroys the shinobi world vibe.

Enjoyed the first half of this story, the second half not so much. But I kept reading cause I had faith you'd do good on this story. But now there hasn't been any update on over a year. I'll give you some more time before I delete this story and forget about you and it. Which is a shame really.

small rant nothing important
but why would he stop to take her on in taijutsu when he could of probley just ran through her