| Reviews for No Longer Whole |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 2/8 If Zeus is a Jerk and you know it clap your hands! *clap* *clap* If Zeus is a Jerk and you know it clap your hands! *clap* *clap* If Zeus is a Jerk and your not sure why he’s King of Gods because he’s such a jerk then clap your hands! *clap* *clap* |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 Oh wow that was amazing and the ending was so mysterious I loved it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2018 The ONE problem I have with this is: ‘... the child had pulled out a pen and clicked it ...’ arrrggghhhhhhhhh! |
 Blufox03 chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 This was such a powerful story. I looked at the art that inspired this and I'm not sure what Golden-Flute would think, but in my opinion, you certainly did it justice. |
| Tomas chapter 1 . 5/28/2018 This story was amazing, if you could add a little more series about Percy after he got partial immortality that would be great! |
| fluffier432 chapter 1 . 4/16/2018 welp. i must say, this is one of the few fanfics ever that made me cry. good job. |
| DarthDestroyer2 chapter 1 . 4/18/2017 Oh my god this is so heartbreaking. I love this one-shot. I'm not even going to mention how you spelled "Twelfth Legion Fulminata" wrong. (Sorry) |
| tomhollandprotectionsquad chapter 1 . 1/28/2017 amazing! |
| Shadowlit chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK THIS WAS AMAZING but there are a few word problems but MY GOD IT'S STILL BEAUTIFUL |
| Sara chapter 1 . 11/13/2015 Oh. my. gosh. I LOVED this story. seriously, I absolutely loved it. I'd always seen the comic, but this man, it hit right in the feels. |
| SilverMist chapter 1 . 8/21/2015 YES. YES, YES, YES. THANK YOU |
| Achilles risen chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 This story is great! Please continue |
| lidhigens chapter 1 . 7/26/2015 Honestly, I both love and hate this story. Good job for that painful combo. |
| jason chapter 1 . 7/22/2015 this story is amazing so glad you wrote it |
| Vicky chapter 1 . 7/17/2015 this is absolutely amazing!i love it!i've always thought Percy was cheerful and positive,but I've never thought about the dark side of him(what would he be without Annabeth,and seriously,he's sexier and hotter in his dark version!)I love you!Perce! |
