It’s a shame that you abandoned this story, it had such lovely beginning with so much potential!

Please do update! Amazing story!

Oh, please pleeeeease update and continue and finish this story! It is quite wonderful and I am dying to know what happens. What will you trade?

Amazing story , can't wait until you update

Liking this story so far.

Please post more!

Please continue! This is great! Well done!

Charming and ingenious. I'm not sure I understand it completely, though, but what's Sarah going to do now that she knows? And what is Evithian up to?

I love this story! I truly do. I really hope that you continue.

Great second chapter. Your explanation about magic and Jareth's offer is genius. You're work is inspiring. Thank you for writing.

I really want to see where you take this awesome idea of a story. Of course Jareth was in her dreams...

Oh! Come on! There has to be more than that!

What a captivating beginning to what I'm sure will be an incredible story. It's well written, and easy to read. The story isn't one that's been done before. And the imagination involved is genius. I love how the faerie (did I spell that right?). I love how they barter for everything. And I love how each group has their own way of doing things. I love the idea you touched on how they ended up in the underground, and how Sarah is obviously still afraid of Jareth.

I can't wait for more. Please continue this story. Please create long loooong chapters. And PLEASE write quickly.

Thank you for this first little taste.

Intrigued. I have a bunch of questions, but I assume they'd be answered as you progress. I hope to see more soon. Thanks.

I'm intrigued. I hope you decide to continue!

I really hope you intend to keep this up. You're a marvelous storyteller.

This looks really good, you have my interest. Looking forward to seeing why they ended up living there - update soon!