Great story update please

Can’t wait for more

Please update soon

Well I like the whole idea, but the grammar is kind of hard to read. That's understandable, but the whole baby being able to talk and stuff, and the way he said he wanted breast milk? That was super creepy...

Can't wait for the next chapter en more please update soon love this story

I agree with the one person in these comments who actually gave constructive criticism. You need a beta. Coz I couldn't get past the horrible grammar either.

Amazing story update please

Great story so far, I can't wait to see who takes Edward out. I hope it's Bella or aro

Great story so far, I can't wait to see who takes Edward out. Lol

Thank you for your story. I love it! Please continue it.

Very good. I guess by the time Caleb is not nursing anymore he might be more than half vampire because of all the venom.

Yeah! Isabella is a vampire!

Too many spelling and grammatical errors. Can't get into the story because of this. Potential in the story line.

love the story so far and the last chapter was brilliant

wow this was a good chapter update, thank you for sending this to us. Wow so Bella will have her dad with her for the rest of her life unless he meets his true mate right. I like this story so far. Thank you for sending this update to us, and have a good week.;