Reviews for Darkness of Birth
Lena chapter 7 . 7/21
Really liked your story so far. I hope negative reviews won't discourage you from continuing this story especially when most of them are completely stupid. Can't wait for what comes next :)
Wika0304 chapter 7 . 5/10
please update, it's interesting
justreading-n-saving chapter 7 . 4/5
Just read your fic all in one go. Wow, loving the angst and the plot so far. Thanks for putting this up, so much thought has gone into it and it’s been such a long time since I’ve found a good fanfic that really hooks me like this. Looking forward to the next update!
whattheDalek chapter 7 . 1/24
I’m sorry to hear you’ve gotten such rotten reviews, because honestly this is probably one of the most realistic depictions of the human experience in fanfiction. You do a fantastic job with characterization, and you know your psychology well. I love how fair you are to all your characters, even the ones you proclaim to dislike, such as Tony Stark (who is honestly my favorite). I find no fault in Harry’s anger—which is understandable given his perspective of events paired with his ultimate desire for familial love, even if it had soured as time went on. I love that you don’t bash on the characters. You humanize them, and it’s brilliant. I love the psychologist (and I think I know who it is, but I don’t want it denied or confirmed because spoilers are not for me) and how she twists psychoanalysis to suit her own motives. And even when Harry doesn’t take to the characters I like, I only feel sadness for Harry. This is such a fresh perspective, and much better than the cringey superhusbands I was preparing myself for hahaha. I thank you for the lack of total tooth-rotting fluff, and for exploring the darker points of humanity. This is fantastic. You are fantastic. Fight the power.

WtD
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 7 . 1/21
The Invaders? What happened to the Howling Commandos? I hope to read more of this in the future. Can’t wait for the next update! How will Steve find out what Howard did? Can Harry be saved?
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 6 . 1/20
What is Dr. Sofen doing? Why’d she push that woman to kill herself? Why’s she trying to get Harry to kill Tony? Will Harry ever learn the circumstances of his birth?
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 4 . 1/18
Where’s the Basilisk? If Tom told Harry he "forfeited [his] soul" after he cast the Crimson Bands of Cyttorak, how can Dr. Strange use it with no trouble?
terrahsims chapter 1 . 1/6
I love this story! My mom is adopted and she hates her birth mother with an unholy passion for giving her up. You have truely captured that in Harry. Wow! I know people don't understand that rage that adopted children/adult can have due to abandonment issues but you captured it perfectly.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/16/2019
Awesome story I wish it was updated more than just once a year
Araytigre chapter 7 . 12/15/2019
Sadly, Tony is living in a dream world if he thinks that the connection between the three of them can be kept from Steve, let alone the truth of how Harry was actually conceived and borne. Right now, Harry thinks that Tony is his Father that took him from his Mother (for whatever reason), and had him adopted out out of shame for what he did, which has a shading of the truth, but not the Whole story. Thank You. TTFN
Dobby and Padfoot chapter 7 . 12/15/2019
Great chapter! I loved reading about what happened with McGonagall and who Harry killed. It'll be interesting to see what happens next with Steve and Tony. Thanks for updating! Anyone who says you're any of those things you listed in the beginning of this chapter must be very ignorant. Literally half the stories on this site use the same characters you do and they have the same reactions and prejudices; there is no way the thoughts and opinions of characters should reflect the author. :)
hotxhotguy chapter 7 . 12/13/2019
Another emotional chapter. The real criminal here is Stark Sr. I want to torture that son of a bitch, but Bucky gave him an undeserved quick death.

Also, Welcome back. *thumbs up*
James Birdsong chapter 7 . 12/10/2019
Good story
FANactic Writer chapter 7 . 12/12/2019
Love the chapter!~
Guest chapter 7 . 12/10/2019
This story is very interesting to read. Please update it. I'm eagerly waiting for it
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