Ah this was sweet. I wish you would continue this, but it’s a sweet standalone too

I really loved this. I stumbled upon a fan art of these two together and I've sort of shipped them since. This was really cute and fluffy and I could actually picture this happening in the show, probably sometime between V2 and V3. Both of them were in kept in character pretty well. I really like seeing my favorite couples hold hands, so that you for that part. I also like how you alluded to the soundtrack at the beginning of the story. And I like how Jaune never found out who Neo really is and all the bad things she's done. Things between them were just kept simple and sweet.

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Aww that was adorable

Cuuuuuuuute X3 I don't suppose there'll be another chapter?

Sweet in every sense of the word. I like it!

This needs a sequel or a second chapter.

I like it very well made

Too sweet for my health... ...meh. Diabetes is worth it for this.

Will more be coming

That was very sweet, it had good humor and well-versed dialogue, good job!

To be honest, I hate Neo's guts normally. Irrational, I know. So in my surprise, I discovered I actually quite enjoy this story. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, as I imagine you do a lot of one-shots!

This is so adorable and makes me smile every time I read it. The beauty of it is that there's literally zero interaction between those two characters in the show. That gives talented writers such as yourself free reign to do as you please with them without losing realism. And you did an outstanding job.

I think I speak for everyone when I say I'm waiting for Neo to get her precious umbrella back!

That was a wonderful story! Not a pairing I'd ever expected to see at that. Neo is such a great character and you captured what I'd expect a mute girl's flirtatiousness to be, pretty well