great story but i syill dont undererstanmd who the three at the end were

This was literally published before I was born

So many spelling errors and use of incorrect words. Sorry, but this is impossible to read

Oh my gosh! I loved this!

Please tell me why are Snape's robes screaming (bellowing means a person roaring in pain or anger) while clothes would billow (a large undulating mass of something, typically cloud, smoke, cloth or steam.

cat eye glasses were not considered cool in the 1970's. They were geek glasses.

Why if Remus recognized Hermione did he not recognize his own wife Chloe? You stated that they lost a student to an attack, the same attack that sent Chloe back in time.

Great story!

scare - that should be SCAR

Noone has mentioned horcruxes. Are there horcuxes in this story?

noone has mentioned what the potion was that Neville drank - I wonder if it was polyjuice? And Neville actually looked like Sirius? That's the only reason why Peter would think he was Sirius!
as far as I can work out anyway.

Peter watches the happy scene with a look of discuss on his face - that should be - a look of DISGUST on his face

Fudge Candy! That's good. I never would have made that cionnection. I should have though!

and from an earlier chapter - Remus is on the train and has to deal with dementors - Year 3 I think - damn foul creators - Creators refers to the gods - dementors are CREATURES!

It's kind of confusing have 3 girl;s who all came from the past, suddenly show up in the future (or present) and were married to men in the past.

Caro frank longbottom and then severus snape
Chloe - Remus Lupin
Hermione/Melody - Sirius Black

And we are back to the loud dinning hall again. Remember DINING only has ONE N!

Yes, I would love to know how Remus and Sirius are going to be able to claim their much younger wives! This will be fun!