Reviews for Underworld Ascension |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great job. Really enjoyed it. Thanks Frank |
![]() ![]() ![]() what? no aftermath? seriously? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() lucius was already killed before this chapter by Mr. Granger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh thank God for a sec I was expecting some yaoi shit I'm tired of that crap |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought Lucius was already dead killed by mr granger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
![]() ![]() ![]() First two are definitely Floo and Apparition. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say Portkey and Broomsticks for the second two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool idea but waaaayyyyy too rushed, in the span of a day harry does a complete 180 in personality threatens dudley goes to London finds put ron is a dick find s out he's adopted gets a sword that he magically knows how to use gets a few guns that he magically knows how to use gets attacked by lycans and then gets turned into the hybrids we know, then there's that whole thing about Katie' s parents being perfectly ok with her running off with a group of vampires lycans and teenage boys, I like the idea just slow it the fuck down any single one of those events could and should have been a chapter unto themselves |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story I really liked it good job writing the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pbbbt another "My Magic Core was blocked by Dumbledore." So wow very cliché, I've read someone who stated such a thing would be unnecessary if you control allergy aspects of a person's life. Would prefer if Michael was dead he was a shit character anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() last chapter could have ended better or are there more to come? |
![]() ![]() ![]() here for the cookies in order of mention ... floo powder. aparition. threstals. brooms. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That ending was very anti climatic... |