ROFL that last one lol

I line this story it's unique
Maybe have chapters with interactions with natsu because in one chapter she was somewhere else then the next it was mentioned that she met him

Congrats on 16 chapters and 25k words! That's quite a feat! I'm actually kind of surprised Silv (Silver Inklett) is letting you borrow her OC, Ardelle. Last I knew she was super protective of her and only let a few people borrow her. I'm sure you asked her permission though, and I'm excited bc it's always nice to see author collaboration! Feel free to ignore this question, but I'm curious where you got your inspiration for Vestra? I do love the idea of Metalicana having a mate, especially a water dragon. Can't wait to see what you do next!

this is a gred story i love it

Money says Levy mentions Aubrey and freaks Gajeel out before he attacks them:)

Where is this fanfic going? The more I read, the more I learn that the characters aren't doing anything important for the longest of time. You need to put them back on the plot.

This seems like an interesting method for Aubrey to get over her seas sickness. I hope the issue get solved soon though. I can't wait for them to get to east blue and for her to meet Luffy.
Great chapter!

Yay! A chapter update..sorta! Oh well. Keep up the good work! I am so happy you updated; :D

...I demand an update...BECAUSE THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVE THE IDEA AND EVERYTHING! :D I can't wait for her to perhaps meet the Whitebeard Pirates too and Luffy!

just a question, but did you consider making a scene where Aubrey will eat some jewels cause she is a jade dragon slayer and ewery dragon slayer needs just a little amount of their element to replenish their strenght compared to plain food

nice one, even that part with levy was interesting, this is very intriguing story

That's an interesting idea on how to get out of the motion sickness part. In my opinion, I think that it could how she would manage to go onto other people's ships would be another question, if they were attacking another ship or something, all that the enemies would need to do is get her onto their ship and BAM! Incapacitated dragon slayer! Though by assuming that she's a Devil Fruit user they would be quicker to push her in the water…
You where saying in the top AN that you can't wait to get to the scenes for the GMG, (I'm assuming you mean the Grand Magic Games) Now I'm exited to see her and Mermaid Heel kick butt when she gets back. How long do you plan on her being in the OP world, before getting back to Earthland?
Anyway, great chapter, maybe a bit short but I'm not complaining. Looking forward to the next one and keep up the good work!

Awe man, I actually thought that was going to work at first

Wow this Jade dragon slayer magic is absolutely awesome.

hahahahaha, oh poor you i don't think it was good idea to take on all of those things and loved the new update, :D