I love the story, but the grammar is so bad

Oh my goodness! This would likely be an excellent story if you had someone proofread this before you posted. I can't get past the horrible typos and grammar. Can you please clean this up and repost? I'd follow and favorite if you did.

… your grammar needs some serious overhaul. There was a line or two that showed some promise but overall the structure and writing needs some work. Don't be discouraged and keep at it.

Why do you bold dialogue? That's really odd.

Ok there's only one thing I have to complain about Steve Rogers is a NY guy his baseball team us the Yankees so if you think real hard he has to be Giants fan ( This isn't Chris Evans ok )

I love this story. Please continue it. It is an amazing story

Check your capitals and the story's flow. There's a touch too much explaining to be pure narration. Also Natasha's reaction is a little too fangirly, she's had to seduce people before and she's not a virgin so she wouldn't be that affected by a bit of bare skin, though she might be appreciative.

So I really like the idea you're building on here. However, I think the grammar issues take away from your story telling. If you could get a beta, someone to help you work on the flow a little of your stories, it'd be fantastic

LOVE ROMANOGERS!

What happens in Vegas stays in Vargas. When I was in Vegas I umm did nothing sexual.

GTFO Tony. And stop messing with my ship.

I enjoy this story but there are a lot of mistakes in grammar and wording that make me think it is translated into English it is a great story please do continue

Hard to read with sooo much grammar issues.

It is not the worse story I just didn't like where it was going.

This is the worse story ever you better get them back together or you won't have any readers.