| Reviews for Return to the Grand Line |
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   cynicalneedssleep chapter 16 . 7/15 are u gonna update? |
| blackcute spikerose76 chapter 16 . 7/11 I absolutely LOVED THIS STORY! It so awesome I mean so many twists and turns luffy having a harem! That’s crazy so excited to see who else is joining besides brook and Franky I’m so excited to see I hope ace lives he my favorite he needs some female love in his life. I hope you update this story very soon. |
| harrysfriend1 chapter 16 . 7/3 please continue! |
| PaoloMarsicola chapter 16 . 6/7 Continuing? |
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/28 WHY THE FUCKING HELL ARE YOU ADDING ALVIDA TO THE CREW FUCK WHATS WITH PEOPLE AND ADDING HER SH"S NOT RELEVANT TO THE STORY SHE DOESN"T HAVE A REASON SHE WANTS TO JOIN THE CREW EXCEPT FUCK LUFFY |
| kylekatarn77 chapter 16 . 5/13 Looking forward to the next awesome chapter! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/7 Thanks for putting alvida in this. Peace. No need to read any more |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/7 One mistake. Puffy does not have his rubber powers but that does not mean he can't eat a lot anymore. We have seen that all Monkeys eat huge amounts. |
| Gen3sian chapter 9 . 5/9 You got wrong where Vivi is Ms. Wednesday and her partner is Mr. 9 |
| Pinkypi chapter 16 . 5/5 hope you come back to this one it's really good and doesn't feel forced like a lot of others |
| Rickjames196 chapter 16 . 4/22 nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu |
| Rickjames196 chapter 13 . 4/22 Awww the feels at the end |
| Rickjames196 chapter 12 . 4/22 Im glad he killed wapol, that is one of the things that keeps me from going back to one piece after I started reading fics. I had to remind myself who is who from wiki and saw how pretty much everyone they face is still alive... I mean cmon I know it's shonen but I think less than 5 people the straw hats have faced are actually dead... Arlong shot nami's mum point blank while she watched and you telling me even if off-screen nami didn't just slit his throat after luffy knocked him out...or any of the villagers for that matter? cmon. |
| Rickjames196 chapter 8 . 4/21 zoro is so whipped haha |
| Rickjames196 chapter 6 . 4/21 Awww the feels at the end. And I so called sanjixnojiko when she wiggled her brows at nami. |
