sirius called james and lily’s kid BAMBI I GENUINELY LAUGHED

Of course Sirius would do this

Adorable!

I really love it when Sirius is being forward like this

Lololol. Man, that Sirius. He sees what he wants and he takes it. Haha. This had me chuckling the whole time.

This is wonderful :)

I really enjoyed the way you wrote everyone. Sirius has absolutely no idea about anything like social cues, decorum, boundaries or personal space, does he? Haha but I loved how you wrote Remus, too, half-dazed and unsure, half embarrassed and very aware - it came across very well.

I loved how James apologised for him, too. Cant imagine how many times he's had to do that over the years :') he came in very well, too; exhausted but happy and looking after his friend. It feels very like him.

I really enjoyed this one, it got a laugh out of me once or twice so well done :)

Hahaha omg, Sirius totally came from the mental ward. Loved it :D

LOL. Sirius does come across as coming from the mental ward. It's a good thing Remus doesn't mind a pushy Sirius! Of course, who could really resist him anyway? :)

Yay! Though for some reason, I read Sirius's dialogue really fast like he's super hyper. Very sweet and fluffy!

Whoa, that was brilliant! Your characterisation of everyone, but especially Sirius, was amazing. I was completely in love with Sirius and Remus's dialogue. Super impressed that you were able to make this situation work! Remus's thought about Sirius possibly being from the mental ward was also hilarious, and I really liked James's appearance, particularly him apologising for his very forward friend.

Cute:3

So cute ! :3 But Sirius was still a little bit creepy ! x)
Do you think of giving this little pearl a second chance (chapter) ? Because that would be lovely !
Thanks,
Anthea

This was definitely cute. And I like Sirius' way of asking Remus to be his boyfriend. A bit forward, don't you think, Sirius? Who was Remus' ex though :o? Good job.

Aww Sirius may very well have escaped the mental ward but Remus doesn't care. And who would? It's Sirius. I kind of want to see where this goes.

That Sirius is one cocky little basterd, isn't he! :P Loved it.