So much love for this, I can't help but review and let you know I can really feel the LOVE between them, so strong! so great!

oh good lord my heart's full with emotions. this is soooo sweet T.T home is where the heart is; and for Sasuke, it is Sakura.

This was so cuteee

Hot! Cute! Beautiful!

Aw! Sakura is so understanding. And your story is so cute!

Your story made me cry..

Wow, this was so good! It's great! I love it! I love this type of Sasuke, it feels more real and really close to the real character. Thank you so much and Good Job!

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I really enjoyed reading your story! Very descriptive and we'll written. I Was very surprised when I read your note at the end when you mentioned English is not your first language. I did notice you mixed the names and couple of times and Sasuke was a little out of character, but still very enjoyable story

'Ears turn red' So passionate, I really should have found this sooner. While I don't actively review fics with smut or lemons (because part of me is still embarrassed to admit I read them, a lot of them...), you are a notable exception, and for good reason. English isn't your primary language?! This story flows extraordinarily well despite that, and the words are very descriptive.

I seriously need you to do more writing, because I have rummaged through this site so many times I couldn't count them all trying to find someone who could write decently. You write much more than decently. And the fact that English is not you first language makes this all the more spectacular. I would personally love it if you could write more stories, I will be sure to read them! Fantastic job, your writing is excellent!

That made me so happy. It was perfect.

Dayum. That was awesome! For someone's whoever never written any love scenes ... you have got it. You've definitely got it.

English isn't your first language?! Damn, girl! This was a better fic than half the ones I read by people whose primary language IS english! Definitely a good read, I liked how it wasn't strictly about the sex, but the sex was a good addition to the story.

This was wonderful! It was the perfect dose of daily fluff and smut a person could need, and your portrayal of Sasuke was beautiful - you actually made me like him, lolz. I love the reason why Sasuke is not home often, and the motivation behind it.

From a critical point of view, the sex scene was adequately written, and it contained enough lust and romance to form a nice balance. The only issue I found was that it was written solely in Sakura's point of view - this would have been okay had the entire story been in Sakura's POV. As it is, though, I felt you should have included more of Sasuke's thoughts and feelings (but then again, this is coming from a person who can barely write a kissing scene without hiding under a table) xD

Anyway, I really loved your story. It's a cliche, naturally, but it's one of those that you just can't have enough of. For your first lemon (and even for the fact that English isn't your native language, but you used it wonderfully), it was amazing. Bravo!