“Korra's smile twisted into a grimace, and her shoulders visibly drooped. Her effort to make a joke hurt: "A lot smaller though. What I really meant was this much richness. The Earth Kingdom is so devastated right now…"

It sounded like a criticism, and Asami wanted to bristle again. She worked hard for the money she earned, and she gave back to those in need. It was lavish, but she didn't have to live like a pauper to prove she wasn't greedy and entitled.”

Ok this makes me wanna say “eat the rich” come on. A rich person getting mad and defensive at someone stating the fact that while they’re living lavishly other people are struggling is the worst fucking thing. Plus the whole “I work hard for my money thing” BIG eye roll what like the people who’re struggling just aren’t working hard enough? Maybe Asami should open her purse

This was beautiful. Thank you for writing it. You capture their thought processes and emotions so well.

'Sup autor? Dude, i'm really in love with this history. Pleeeease, continue!

really beautiful story... congratulations.
you made them human and superheroes at the same time. Vulnerable and strong. Best couple ever.

i am falling in love with this story... this is beautiful!

this chapter is really beautiful.
This is what is really missing from the show... a slowly evolution of the characters... i love your Asami perspective. you capture them really well. Congratulations. - Off I go to the next adventure/chapter! ;)

I love this fic very much. I look forward for more!

I'm so, so late on this (as I was to LoK and korrasami), but this is fucking GORGEOUS and everything I always wanted in a Book 4 fic add more so. 3

This was such a great read! After finishing a series rewatch, reading something that filled in the gaps for Asami in Book 4 was perfect. I really enjoyed your depictions of everyone-totally spot on-and gosh I got so swept up with Asami and her feelings! She was perfectly relatable. Nice job!

Amazing story! Everyone is so in character it's incredibly believable! I wish this actually happened! Keep up the good work.

Great story. You should make more Asami POVs. Maybe one during Book 3 that'd be great

This was really good! Thank you for sharing!

Just found your fanfiction because of a suggestion and more than GLAD I did!
You write so well! All those details, the funeral (wich almost made me shed some tears) and the way you put yourself and the readers into Korra's but mostly Asami's character is amazing. You are very talented. I was really expecting something to happen between these two since Asami stil hasn't confessed her feelings to Korra. But it seems you have problems continuing the fic.. I guess that is okay if you want to stop here. After all, you are the author and you are the one to decide whether you wan't to go further or not :)
Anyway, good luck on what you will write next, whether it is another chapter or another story :)

Such a well written story!

This story is very lovely and thoughtful. Also shed a few tears for Asami's grieving for Hiroshi. Thank you for writing this. I wonder if you will write more. If yes, that would be great. No pressure though.