Reviews for The Konoha Negelected Duo
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22
Looking forward to ch 12 where naruto gains access to konohas nuclear arsenal and wipes the village off the face of the earth
HyperA1985 chapter 1 . 3/22/2019
I am looking forward to chapter 11 and I hope Naruto gains Shinigami Zanpakuto Ryujin Jakka.
Dragoncyber22 chapter 11 . 11/19/2018
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story
inuyasha16451 chapter 11 . 1/14/2018
Omg. Please come back and update this awesome story soon.
Manlymudkip chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
Please say that is a Blue Exorcist reference!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2017
Gayyyyyy
246vili chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
So you made Marx to have a weakness to cats? If so he would be good friends with Yugito from Kumo.
Hatred chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
I do not know how trash like this fucking get popular. This stroy is all around the fuckinfg place and too damn rushed, that's it sad. I would go into a rant about ehy this fucking sucks, but I feel like it's a waste. Delete this garbage.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29/2017
make naruto immortal like the female nine tail are make him half demon fox with nine tails and ears are make him a full nine tails i want him to be a full nine tails no one ever hardly writes one the half demon less rare but good
heavydestro chapter 2 . 5/31/2017
Be more descriptive the whole naruto and his family situation seemed mega rushed we didn't even read to many bad situation they put him in. You gotta make the reader feel bad for naruto. All we really know is that he was heavily favored over his sister which happens in real. (Shit that's what Everybody Loves Raymond is about lol) we can assume other bad things happen but then that's just not really as good
heavydestro chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
I love the concept and I'm excited to read. The only thing I don't like is you just making them kage level right off the bat. I mean it's fiction so anything can happen but just explain it a lot more like while they wee training you could have brought in different people to thickin the plot
Thousand drop chapter 10 . 6/1/2016
Okay, I want to know something, doesn't both naruto and Marx have gravity seals and don't they have the bloodlines, and both aren't even using the strength of there eyes to its full power, even though in the story before the did use it.
Thousand drop chapter 9 . 6/1/2016
Why, why make naruto and atsei fight? You are breaking my heart, but this story is amazing!
rhizz17 chapter 10 . 4/27/2016
Update please
Silvereye-BW chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
Love it. Can't wait for more badass Naruto goodness.
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