Update? Thanks :)

An update would be so awesome, please don't forget about this story!

I hope you update soon! I would love to see this story in action, please don't forget about it!

i wonder what happened to everyone oooooh
pretty good update, but i'm hoping for a little more substance in the next one

hmm intriguing, i like it so far :) good job

Great chapter. Li, Amaya and Maddie seem like interesting characters and does Chiron wanting to see them have anything to do with the eventual quest that's coming up?
I can't wait for the next update.

Wow. That was dramatic. Try to separate the paragraphs, but other than that, wow.

This is so good :) I love how the characters others submitted are so unique!

So I'm not going to lie, I wasn't expecting too much out of this story. However after reading the prologue and the first chapter I feel like I was wrong to think that. Li and Amaya seem like alright characters who are probably going to have a lot of conflict. I'm really curious now though as to what happened, some people died! Was the character in the prologue them? Well stay awesome and can't wait for the next update.

Good chapter, can't wait to see the rest :) The whole Idea seems interesting, and I am looking forward to Ello showing up! Update as soon as you can, I hate waiting ;) !

Li calling everyone Miss, I love it! But it would get really annoying, so no wonder Amaya was acting like that. I really like her attitude, tough and take no shit from any one. She's going to be an interesting character. Mads also seems like One to keep an eye on, she's basically the opposite of Amaya. Happy, go-lucky, and optimistic. I like that there is an awesome variety of characters, it makes for a great story in the long run. Also, I really like Amaya's name.
Great chappie, I can't wait for the next one!

This is a pretty good chapter considering it was typed on a phone.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Great job with Amaya. That's exactly how she'd be towards someone she doesn't consider a friend. I wonder what Chiron has to tell them. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Sweet. Hey good luck with writing such a huge cast.

Okay didn't you already post this?

If so... what changed?