Awesome job on this story Im loving it so far! Im really glad baby 5 showed up when she did x3 I cant wait for the next chapter c:

Nice to see Kureha here. And no, we are not interested in knowing her secret of eternal yourh, lol. Wonder what had happened to Law within one week and why is Sengoku involve. Is this some sort of plan against Joker? Want to know more. Thanks for the update anyway :D.

Glad you updated. Things are getting interesting, I'm looking forward to what's next

Iiiinteresting. And, yeah, time seems to go by so fast! :)

I liked the way you portrayed baby five, very sweet.

okay, first Im gonna asking something, since this is M rated, thats means there re going to be at least some lime or blood action. soooo, one important thing that I really want to know is, between luffy and law, who will be the top/seme? Im hoping luffy will be the seme *puppyeyes
I ve been searching LuLaw ff, but many of them is actually LawLu
so please tell me, which pairing will do u make, LuLaw or LawLu
I know for some people it doesnt matter as long as they together, but I hate seeing luffy being the weak one or even a bottom

I like thinking of Law and Baby 5 having that kind of sibling feel to them as well so their interaction here is real nice.

Super looking forward to the next update~ Have a super day!

Okay, that was hilarious. xD

As for errors, when Sachi came over you wrote that Law put the "life" behind his back. Apparently when he was getting ready to go out, time was going too fast for Law's "licking" and the "finally" after Law trimmed his goatee should not have the "f" capitalized. You forgot the "d" at the end of "obscure" when Law was looking at the sky to make plans. Something also tells me Law doesn't have "curbs" in all the right places after he put on some different pants. ;) You also put "He called for a drink, as que sat on one of the stools" and when Baby Five snuck up behind Law you had him turn around so fast that the guy "infant" of him nearly fell.

That's about all I found minus punctuation errors, which I don't feel like mentioning the specifics of. :P

Great chapter! I love it! Keep it up!

Ok I can see some of the misspelled words but I understand since this story is un-betad. My only comment is that you should use at least a line break (like - or xxxx), just to separate the scenes. Law is supposed to have a wild night but thanks to Baby 5, he was interrupted. Nice to see that Law and Baby 5 have some sort of sibling bond although Baby 5 still had loyalty to Doflamingo. Thanks for the update :)

I know it's silly because Law hasn't accepted Luffy's affection but I'm glad lil'sis Baby was there to keep him from cheating lol
Glad you updated. And there are mistakes all over, what I tend to do is wait a few days and then reread the story with "fresh eyes" and fix them as I come to them.
Loved it again, I await your next chapter

its nice to learn more about laws backround and the minor characters, although I hope that there will be some lawlu in the next one :)

I LOVE IT AHK. I love how Law is so chill waking up next to luffy lol, and hes all "this is okay" he's probably drunk on sleep through, who knows xD

Oh I wanna join the group hug too :)! Law was just simply astounded that in his just one week of absence, a handful of people had shown concern over his disappearance to the point that they are willing to conduct a search for him. He have not realized yet that in just a little way, he had managed to be a part of everyone's lives most especially to Luffy. I think Law had felt that Luffy really cares for him and I think soon he will be going to reciprocate Luffy's feelings. I am just getting curious on him and Doflamingo. I just wonder what that man wants from him and I think some of the upper levels of the police force had known a connection between Law and Doflamingo. Thanks for the update :D

suuuuper nice, keep going!