Are you going to cancel this or are you still working on it

Um, it's kinda sudden I guess, but uh, I drew something for this story...
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Hope you like it!

Even though I've been reading this story for a while, I decided to review. Because this story deserves another review.
Anyways... I would say that Shulk getting kidnapped instead of peach was an interesting plot twist except it wasn't because that happens like every second super smash galaxy story. XD. Ah well, it won't be as d as serpent galaxy anyway so I think it's all good. I'm curious to what Daedalus is gonna do to poor lil Pittoo and I look forward to your next update

Sorry for not reviewing on this until now. I asked for updates on some of your other stories though. I like the idea of Shulk being the princess here. It is both funny and kind of sad though. He has to put up with bowser and his kids in peach's dress. However due to his nature that isn't much of a problem. So is Alvis gonna evventually get the monado back and restore its powers? Or will he have to wait until whoever inhabits the sword does something? Eventually he'll find a way to fix the monado either way right? That is usually how stories with this kind of plot work... Not sure if your following the plot to a specific mario game but you can answer that another time. Also now that Diamond is involved as well as Deadalus, looks like Shulk is gonna have to deal with a LOT more than just the plot, outcome, and situation of this game. Hope you're like and keep it up! ;)
SUMMER IS UPON US! No more school! XD

I like Shulk's point of view at the beginning of the story. Awesome. Robin isn't the worst airel fighter, Little Mac is. At least Robin has Elwind, unless you abused your tomes. Yes, the B/W Pokemon Adventures/Pokemon Special manga wasn't as good as the others (but at least Black could beat the Pokemon League) Ha! Ash, trying to beat a magic koopaling? hahaha, he can't even beat a Pokemon league. Now, if its his manga (Pokéspe) counterpart... thats a different story. (Prepare for a big, big, rant.) When Lemmy makes a comment about 'Catch 'em all, this is what Pokemon is about!' and Ash is like 'thats not what its about its friendship!' All the main protags in Pokémon Special are good relations with Pokemon (they view them as friends, allies, partners, etc. as opposed to Pryce's view of them as tools to reach goals, it varies from person to person) and each other (Kanto through Hoenn anyway, the other regions aren't connected); in addition to that, Crystal has managed to register them all Kanto through Hoenn (Catching GOD or the creation trio? Have fun screwing over the F*CKING UNIVERSE.) If each ball is destroyed with a simple electrocution from Pikachu, then Green's Charizard, Gold's Typhlosion, Crystal's Arcanine, or etc. could use something like Heat Wave to instantly vaporize the balls while Red's Espeon or Crystal's Xatee makes a psychic bubble around them. Pearl's Dugtrio or Green's Rhyperior can hit Lemmy from underground while Red's Areodactl strikes from above. Venusaur, Meganium, Sceptile, Blastoise,Tododile, Swampert, Charizard, Typhlosion, and Blaziken could use the Ultimate moves at the same time to eradicate everything in its path (at the expense of the land) He can't kill everything at once. They each have 6 Pokemon and more in the box, so the combinations are endless. If that isn't enough, they've befriended almost every Gym Leader and Elite Four member, and have the antagonists as limited partners when problems involve them. And once when they needed a lot of Pokemon to assist, their pal Bill, who has the ability to unleash hordes upon hordes of Pokemon from boxes, did that and now they have that at their disposal. If THATS not enough, they always come in contact with Legendaries. Kanto quartet and Blaine have calmed and befriended Mewtwo (Mew is an *sshole), Emerald is very friendly with Latias and Latios and can call them anytime he wants, Crystal and Gold calmed and can recieve help from Arceus, Blue had captured the legendary birds to overcome her ornithophobia, Dia has Reggagigas (useful as sh*t, but that's beside the point) Gold and Ruby have gotten help from Celebi, Sinnoh Trio got Egg from Manaphy and Gold hatched Phione. That kid they met can use Heatran and Cynthia, Darkrai and Cressilia. Sinnoh trio are LITERALLY connected to the Lake trio. They're not DexHolders for nothing. *cough cough Ash got a pity PokeDex coughcough*
Anyway, Groudon and Kyogre made the continents and the oceans right? Both have to stay dormant, or they'll go back to their fighting, and Rayquaza will have to calm them down AGAIN. Not relevant, just thought I'd mention it.
Each of these guys are worth 50 of Ash.
• Each can win a Pokemon League (sorry if I'm being redundant)
• One achieved capturing them all in her region
• One is currently a gym leader
• Conquered multiple evil organizations and people, whereas Ash can't defeat ONE
• Made peace and worked with 3 of those people
• Kidnapped by Ho-Oh at age six, lived through harsh conditions (then escaped), lived on her own while taking care of a two year old (Silver). Then acts perky and comforts the others so the other DexHolders won't feel down
• Caught Arceus for a second
• Restored Arceus' faith in humanity
• Traveled through the fabric of reality
• Temporarily harnessed the power of Groudon and Kyogre (it takes weeks to do) to make them go back to sleep
• Can get all the Gym badges and save the world under 80 days on foot
• Can win all the Pokemon Contests and save the world under 80 days
• Traveled through the antimatter world
• Earned Gym Badges in under 40 days
• Conquered Battle Frontier in 7 days
And so on.
I don't hate the anime. I just don't like the idiot that appears all the time without really learning or improving anything. It takes a magnificent moron to have a Pikachu lose to a Magikarp despite over a decade worth of experience. He's undoubtedly an experienced trainer, but makes rivals who just started and loses to that new 'rival' just about every single time. Ah, rant/ramble end.

Each reference is like finding a gem. I can't believe Frozen is still a hit and getting a sequel -_- haha poor Link

Wow, 14 follows and this is the 4th review?! Huh. If everyone who followed reviewed every chapter so far once, there would be 126 reviews! Geez! And that's not even counting the Guests (I'm not one, I'm just not logging in right now) and the people who don't like the story and say so (and then adding a one time bad review to the count). But who am I to talk, I only have reviewed the 4th chapter.

I really like your story mechanics and how...nice it is. I mean, other stories I read make no sense and the readers are generally like 'dafuq'. You even added some of your own stuff in that feels like it COULD exist. Like when other stories insert an OC for no apparent reason other than to exist. I really enjoy the Shulk/Robin pairing, and your reason behind it. One other thing I can be summarized as, Newcomer Robin sees Newcomer Shulk. Ey, dat boy is cute. Robin and Shulk kiss. THE END. And the difference between female Robin and male Robin. I kinda thought of them as the same. But honestly, I thought male Robin was canon Robin. People think Robin and Chrom are canon, but Sumia is literally carrying Chrom's child in the intro.

i feel like bowser crossed the moral event horizon

This is shorter than what you usually write so im a little bit sad?

But so far so good, deer, cant wait to read more :3

You can about imagine how hard it was not to burst out laughing at the title. This is going to be so good. Also, the only thing to note is "blonde" is for girls while "blond" is for boys. Thought I'd let you know.