Reviews for Hunger
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 1/29
lol gohan saying to his soon to be wife videl i meant what i had said i fell in love with the tough teenage tomboy that wouldn't stop puting herself in dangerous situations and didn't stop pestering me till i told her all my secrets not to mention that sex move you did videl smirking at her fiance gohan hey if you had just told me the truth from the start and that was a martial arts move
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 10/14/2019
videl hissing saying to gohan my husband better not take your penis out of my pussy leave it in drain your seed into my pussy
derek chapter 1 . 10/9/2019
gohan saying to videl i want the persistent girl that would not give up till she knew my secrets the tough girl who that i was scared of getting hurt or worse killed yes sayianwoman i love you videl saying to gohan the persistent girl wanted to get to know you but you kept running away from me now that i have the cell games hero as my boyfriend maybe now the blonde idiots and angela will back off i mean how many nos not interested can sharpener take
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
videl saying to gohan drain your seed into my pussy with your penis
Derek chapter 1 . 5/1/2019
Videl to gohan you me bed now
GV lover chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
this was good *thumbs up*
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
Wouah c'est chaud j'aime.
Dyton chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
One of the things that I liked so much about this story in particular was the way Videl was portrayed. For a lemon, lime, what ever you want to call it, it had a pretty good message, and it was: not to change oneself for your significant other, since they already loves you the way that you are.

True, this lemon could have been more, but for the first one, in a long line of successful ones, it was really well made. I've read this one many times when it was uploaded a while back, and looked for it online when it was deleted. It's one of my favorites.

Definitely recommend this one. Even the people that aren't fond of lemons, this one doesn't have a very heavy lemon, so you get to truly enjoy Gohan and Videl's relationship.

I can't wait for more Lancecomwar. Don't keep us waiting. :)
gaara king of the sand chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
_ that was a great one-shot till next message bye
UnsanMusho chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
This was such an adorable fic, sorry I'm a sucker for fluffy fics XD
I really liked how you showed Videls effort in making Gohan happy, wish they actually showed this (not the lemon part) in the anime.