Reviews for Test Run
Luna del Desierto chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
Thanks for sharing!
Munky0 chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
This is easily in my top five fics, cute hilarious and hawt X3
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Adaar n Sera forever! Please write height difference!
Gabs chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Please more female adaar & sera
ps. empress celene & briala make an amazing pair if you got them back together in the game
LaughingCoffin chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
Amazing... Well written! You plan on writing another fanficition continuing from this one? It be very nice smut :) better than Varric's novels haha
Lady Karo chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
It was hard to read this when Sera and Cole started talking about cookies in my game. And Cassandra blaming Sera for a missing book. Made the story funnier AHAHA
mcdorfman chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Adaar, Sera, and a magical Saartoh Nehreppan (as Iron Bull calls it)?

Woof.
Kreigen chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
I'm not afraid to admit to give this as my reaction to this story...

Woof...

Deary me, playing a fem qunari too, and something about Sera is incredibly endearing. I love that they had their stumbles and it wasn't all magical and perfect. You captured both personalities really well. Very impressed.

Looking forward to reading more from you!
Orunmila chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Where can we apply for pairings? I am shocked nobody has written explicit smut with Josephine yet as her entire romance was far too Disney for my taste. Would love to see some private antivan heatheness and her know of "courtly intrigue" put to good use. Preferably with f!trevelyan but I will take what I can get. You gonna do something with Krem in the future?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Just wow ok
Selena Shepard chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Loved the realism of all this. You captured Sera quite nicely from her fear of all things magical to her choice of words. I wasn't quite sure of Sera at first, but you've definitely changed my mind now. Loved it; can't wait for next Wednesday.
teyfinn chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Effing brilliant..! :)
blamethebluebirds chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Nonsense! You captured Sera's wit perfectly. Oh and, hail Wednesdays!
suziegon chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Where'd you get the nickname "Inky" from?
I love how business-like Sera is when she's stripping and getting Herah to!
That struggle of figuring out how to put on the cock is really cool to see. I've always wondered how characters got around that and figured it'd be awkward trying to get it the first time. From what I remember, your other scenes haven't shown as much of the "how do I even put this thing on?" parts. YES, it's a feeling-cock!
Might sound a bit odd, but I appreciate the detail about the darker pigment between Herah's legs. It adds to the authenticity of the scene. I'm so used to reading about that area being pink (or blue :p) - it's a nice change. Also, same comment about Sera missing her mark the first time she tries to enter Herah from behind - the fumbling is endearing and makes the situation feel more realistic.
I approve so much of Sera using her hand on Herah's clit while going at her from behind. I was literally hoping for that when they got into that position and then I read it! You never disappoint, Rae!
Revan's Mask chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Very nice indeed. I've been getting sucked in DA:I myself, playing, as it so happens, a female qunari as well, so I was quite pleasantly surprised to see this story. Plus, like the original prompter, I like a good role reversal from time to time. Thanks for this and I look forward to more Wednesday one-shots.
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