Hey there Tom, I'm Big Bravo, but now I've decided to take a new direction in my writing.

I have to say i wouldn't think that'll you ever update. I'm sorry to see that the story will no longer continue, this helped inspire me to write my own stories on my old profile, and you were an inspiration as well.

I hope you have a good life and have new inspirations to follow.

-Big Bravo

Damn so thats where you been i didn't notice that you changed the name i ytjink you might have mentioned doing that before but i ha forgotten

No problem bud personal life first.

Homefront wasn't a popular game but I do like its lore. I understand how it's busy and stuff, so take your time Tom.

My laptop is actually been broken for a while and I haven't updated since, as I'm still raising money for a new one.

Hope you're having a wonderful vacation.

Damn long chapter but really really worth the wait brother. Sorry for the long wait on the review class has been kicking my ass. Glad to see you went with the scapegoat another thing I forgot to mention was that both Marabunta and the Lost are international gangs and you don't want to piss off guys with killers in other countries and states that are all connected.

The only problem with how you made them out to be Francisco speaking Spanish was good but Shizuka speaking Japanese and Jamila saying nigga are a no no you gotta copy the style and lingo as well ot else they know you're using a scapegoat.

Awesome gunfight though even better then some of my own in terms of details and pure carnage.

Good on the spray paint and it leaves a funny message for Mara Bunta. Puta means bitch Mara mean gang Grande means big BBG Big Bitch Gang lol.

Nice name for a Die Hard Parody and I can agree I hated the fourth movie. And you read that article about the Zetas forcing men I'm gladiator style fights that's good and I like the name Diablos.

Glad you mentioned it before I did I'm curious about Carla as well but then again I'm weary on any new character to a party seriously trust problems and it was good to see Shizuka have a day job now we know what she does in her free time.

Update soon brother

I'm open to Jamila biting it if she has to between her and Pancho cause Pancho is close to the heart but if possible would like to see both live i stated that before. I like that Pancho is part of the fold now and i like that you referenced them all having been busy with the job for Gerald. I gotta say that wasn't very smart what he did faking like they were Vagos.

He should have probably framed a different gang seeing as he lives in Rancho. I mean he might be cool with some of the Families like CGF maybe only cause Thomas and the other are but Carson ave is an enemy even to the protagonist. Just saying since he did the gang related bait and switch, he could always claim down the line if he doesn't want to fight Vagos, that perhaps another gang did it even if he and Jamila and Shizkuza really did that. The reason i mention this is cause by the events of GTA V the Vagos and the Aztecas are mostly living in peace implying they had a gang war but truced it up. So maybe they go to war in these next few months in fact the GTA V news report says they do the Aztecas were briefly kicked out of Rancho but able to gradually come back so they must have truced it with the Vagois just like the Families and Ballas did. Similiarly to how in 1992 while there was a truce between crips and bloods, there was also a peace summit between various Sureno varrios. But if they did try and blame another gang on blaming the Vagos (Actually f you doon't use that idea i may have to!) The O'Neill Bros don't really tag, i can assume the Armenian mafia doesn't either which is strange they make them look all pro but they're based on Armenian Pride which is a street gang. Can't very wel blame the cartels either so it boils down to Vagos, the Families or Ballas which all though those other gangs don't tag, they would if they were framing anybody else.

Maybe in a future chapter as we've gotten to know Francisco better we should come to understand Jamila better she should reveal some of her past about the Ballas.

Hurray the next chapter and this guy does pay good for missions sometimes.

Not an update but a message that's good because we know you're not dead and that's what I like to see.

Frankly I don't care for a long wait it just makes the chapter more juicer when you get it like waiting six months before your girlfriend will "Spend the Night" lol. It makes it even more juicer when I have an idea of what the next chapter will be about. I'm a patient guy dude I so there's no need to rush on my end.

Anyway I understand self-doubt and don't let that shit get you down brother. I've been writing stories since I was in the ninth grade that was damn near six years ago it might not seem like that because I'm new to Fanfiction but my page on Fictionpress has 11 other stories I've done in my time with I want to say maybe six of them completed. Also I might sound like a nerd but I've been writing Fanfictions since I was in the fifth grade my point to that is I've read a lot of stories and you are one my favorites authors.

What makes you good with this story is that you made OC's some you didn't even make and basically brought them to life. Like I can picture all of your characters and they're some of the most realest and relatable characters I've seen in a story. Your plot, romances, and drama is also good dude. So take that self-doubt and tell it to go fuck itself because Tom the Author is here to stay.

That's fine Tom, it takes some patience for dedicated readers, just glad you're back on track.

It's understandable feeling lack of interest to your stories, that's what happened to me with my stories it happens to everyone. But again glad to see you're back at it.

Regards, Big Bravo

Hurray sam and others killing shall continue

So you said like around chapter 11 Carla would be featured in the next chapter and it's way later did you forget?

Onto the review

It took me a while to read all this. This Moreno character seems interesting a bit hot tempered but interesting it took balls to threaten Trevor and Trevor's reaction with a threat is about what i expected. What's funny about that conversation is a lot of Italians say that yeah Mexicans, and Central Americans are not latin because their ancestry isn't from Rome so i kind of understood that point i didn't used to think of mexicans as native american for some reason but i kind of see it. Just shorter. And wow that guy moonman is a dick what's his deal? And will Martin Madrazo e a villain in this he kind of seemed like one in GTA V but one you don't kill off. Kinda like the uncle who puts a hit on Salvatore in Liberty City Stories.

Highly doubt that about Jar Jar I would be pretty surprised i mean he's dum. Did you see the new star wars? I liked it hated han dying and i liked the jedi girl chick but she seemed like a marue sue she shouldn't have been able to fight like that without training and i liked the storm trooper guy more he light saber dueled with kylo ren but he had his limits fighting wise im surprised no hands were lost. They fucked up killing han it should been chewie like in the books

Maddy seems like a great friend to thomas i liked how they messed with the cops

As I walk through the dead niggers in the gas chamber
I take a look at my life and realize there's no more niggers left
'Cause I've been killing and hanging so long,
That even the niggers thinks that my mind is gone
But I ain't never crossed a nigger that didn't deserve it
I'll be treated like a KKK you know that's unheard of
You better watch how you're blabing and where you're sagging
Or you and your nigger might be lined in cum
I really hate to trip but I gotta locked cock out
As they monkey around, I see myself in the pistol smoke, fool
I'm the kinda KKK the little homies wanna be like
On my knees in the night saying prayers in the KFC

Been spending most their lives, living in the niggers paradise
Been spending most their lives, living in the niggers paradise
Keep spending most our lives, living in the niggers paradise
Keep spending most our lives, living in the niggers paradise

Look at the niggers they got me facin'
I can't live a normal life, I was raised by the KKK
So I gotta be down with the niggers
Too much niggers watching got me chasing dreams
I'm an educated KKK with niggers on my mind
Got my glock in my hand and a gleam in my eye
I'm a locked out cock out straight trippin' nigger
And my homies are down so don't arouse my anger, nigger
Death ain't nothing but a nigger away,
I'm living life, hang or die, what can I say
I've killed 23 niggers now, but can I live to see 24
The way things are going I don't know

Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the ones we kill are niggers and jews

Been spending most their lives, living in the niggers paradise
Been spending most their lives, living in the niggers paradise
Keep spending most our lives, living in the niggers paradise
Keep spending most our lives, living in the niggers paradise

Niggers and the killing, killing and the Jews
Nigger after Nigger, Jew after Jew
Everybody's running, but half of them ain't walking
What's going on in the KFC, but I don't know what's cookin'
They say I gotta learn, but ain't no nigger gonna teach me
If they can't understand nigger, how can they be me
I guess they can't, I guess they won't
I guess they front, that's why I know my life is out of niggers, kike

Been spending most their lives, living in the niggers paradise
Been spending most their lives, living in the niggers paradise
Keep spending most our lives, living in the niggers paradise
Keep spending most our lives, living in the niggers paradise

Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the ones we kill are niggers and jews
Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the ones we kill are niggers and jews

You blocked me? What a fucking queer

The world is mine nigger get back don't fuck with my stack the gauge is racked about to kill a coon I'm the motherfucking moon big dick in a tight poon now the feds try to throw the book cause they're crooks but i shook their worm and their hook niggers hold their breath niggers miss me when im frisky hanging all the chimps like this was Mississippi the unseen pulling strings im the greatest thing i got your woman pucker up fore i fuck her up bow down before i make a phone call get 25 klansman running up on yall nigger please suck on these everybody freeze on your knees butt naked please before any of you niggers get brave remember you're still my slave so bow down when i come to your town bow down when the moon's around bow down cause i aint a nigger like you bow down to the moon who's bigger than you.

I take ten steps then i draw now who's dissing the Whitetopian tradition i bust like a pimple im white to the superficial to the fundamental I don't drag on a nig nag im not being funny hold him down and skin him like an injun with a bunny im moon man the ice cold killa i might ice a mother fucker but i aint vanilla who wanna fuss so i can bust when i cuss smoking green im the king of the white power scene nazis klansman and skin heads doing their thing recognize this dead chimps won't be missed severed head with a mouth full of piss kill em like a butcher with a cow but meanwhile in my town you got to bow

bow down when i come to your town bow down when the moon's around cause i aint a hater like you bow down to the moon who's greater than you

You think you're a gangsta killed wearng a beanie the scariest nigger in the hood don't wanna see me when i slide my gloves on the niggers get stepping bing bing bang i wreck gats i wreck brains with my weapons run away or get your punk ass skinned by th fucking I'm Klan connected simple and plain which means im the top and niggers are bottom of the food chain flashy niggers get stuck up beat the fuck up if you come around get your chain dug down your throat through the stomach into your shit fuck a studio lyricist im real with this talk the talk walk the walk if you're a darkie im trying to saw ur whole fuckin head off nigger you're an inferior race so bitch shut up you can all eat my bullets sho nuff

Bow down when you come to my town bow down when the moon's around i've evolved much further than you bow down to the moon who's murdering you bow down on the white side of town

Yeah tell you something white men make the world go around and niggers are clowns so if you live on the white side of your town make them dirty niggers bow down. Triple K Mafia the world belongs to us.

Great chapter, Tom! I'd personally say it's your best so far. I can see how much thought and time went into it and it definitely paid off. Looking forward to the next one.

I'm glad you had Francisco true to is character when speaking to Trevor and if any body has any questions you can't answer regarding that i will. As for what you said about Star Wars, i think that's pretty much true anyway it was a dumb move for padme to have jar jar take her place. Have you ever heard of Cinema Sins? Tey take a movie and say 'Everything wrong with resident evil" or everything wrong wit die hard or whatever and they pointed tat out in Eisode II.,

I also did Cops Capacity Online too it was a difficult mission for me to write for for some reason anyway nice chapter lots of bodies dropped