This is good. Continue when you can.

Pisses me off that this won't get finished. It's really well written.

Hope you update this someday! Really like reading this.

Did you abandon this story? I'm attached to it, the plot is so good, the characters feel in character and the writing style is good. Please write back if you see this to tell me one or another. How far do you plan to take this? Maybe this could end with Luffy returning to his family so it can be completed? And then if you have time you can make a sequel with Nami and Luffy reuniting?

Why was Dragon an antisocial retard when he was a kid? No wonder he turned out as he did!

Just wanted to say that i love this story. :)

Very much like your story so far. Please keep writing.

Wow! This is really unique and interesting! I really hope you continue this story!

Please update I love this and there isn't another story anywhere like it to fill the void in my brain that this has created

Hi there!

I feel like I'm relatively new to this ship, and I have to say that I absolutely love the way you portray Nami and Luffy working together! This fic is definitely one of the best I've read haha!

I just love how Luffy just doesn't notice how he's grown, and how he thinks about marrying Nami XD good gosh I couldn't stop fangirling in this chapter!

I know it's been a year since you last updated, and I hope that your schedule has gotten better! Please keep up the great work and I hope to hear more from you! :D (though at the same time I hope you don't feel pressured to write haha, just write whenever you feel like it and take your time )

Great story so far.

Hope you update soon.

I think it's one of the best LuNa fanfic I've read in a while, you did a really good job! I hope you'll find time to enjoy writting and don't overdrown with work!

I hope you upgrade soon
this fics is very interesting
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Great story.

This is really cute and interesting! I don't really have any particular pairing within the Straw Hat crew like a lot of people seem to, but sometimes I find an interesting and good story with such a pairing. Yours is quite good. I like the idea of Nami and Luffy ending up as friends and him just sort of deciding that he's gonna marry her 'cause, of course, he loves her.

It's an interesting dynamic having her hide her past about Arlong from him and that he is left at different islands when she's not on trips. Very plausible. I'm curious to see where this goes and if you will include the other Straw Hats as well.

Hope things are alright with you IRL. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but don't push yourself too much. Work really can be tiresome. And to think we dreamed of growing up and having no school... Oh, the good old days.

Have a blessed day, Alastair