Reviews for The Apprentice of a Demon |
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Guest chapter 3 . 2/6/2015 Chomp ! Ahah ! |
Leonas chapter 3 . 1/21/2015 You cna't just do that. Damn it. I was getting into this. I really really was. |
Leez chapter 3 . 1/8/2015 An interesting start, I look forward to seeing more. Louise was a massive influence in a lot of people in canon and so was Saito, with Saito being gone and Louise being so different I can't wait to see what you choose to do later. One thing I can say though is that I'm very much hoping that this is Yuri/ Femslash fic. There's so little good ones in this fandom. Hell there's not much at all. Please keep up the great work! Looking forward to more! Best Regards, Leez |
Yeza Nairomof chapter 3 . 12/16/2014 Omnomnom Louise seems soo fun in this story XD Keep up the good work and hope you update soon. |
tentaclecat chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 Transformation reminds me of Rin Okimura except the flames are white that are hovering near her. Wonder if she's going to stay as emotionless or violent and haughty now that she has demonic powers. |
LeAlon chapter 2 . 12/6/2014 Hope you update asap :) |
Poliamida chapter 2 . 12/5/2014 A very interesting premise, is this a crossover with something? The idea of Satan sealed in a sword reminds me of something, but I'm not sure. Can Louise change her new appearance? The church might give her problems otherwise. Im following. |
idea.getthe chapter 2 . 12/4/2014 ..well, having a bit of soul send to hell but then became the ruler of hell... Was that... Make the soul "donation" a waste? And I have a feeling Louise is more of a succubus than a devil... Just saying... Argh..., to love ru image is entering my mind... |
idea.getthe chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 Very intresting... Bad ass louise |
truefortune chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 I like this one. Though I do hope she would find comfort. |
namer chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 I really like this history and want your upgrade soon, you got my attention Nice history, and have a nice day |
Sky EXE chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 VERY interesting. I've never seen an emotionless Louise before. Nicely done. I'll be keeping an eye on this one. |
King-d22 chapter 1 . 11/29/2014 Interesting update soon |
ChaosxPaladin chapter 1 . 11/29/2014 Not a bad start. Your writing is good; clear, easy to read and concise. Although I was a tad confused at the beginning. From your description you made it seem like she lost her emotions AFTER summoning her familiar. Still, it's just a minor thing. You have my interest sir. |