I hope this story’s not completely abandoned! D: ITS REALLY GOOD!

It makes me want to me cry

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read more!

A very nice start to a great pairing! I liked it very much. If you have time, maybe you'd like to checkout my hardenshipping fics :)

Aw! I love this! :D It's awesome! The fact that May didn't say anything back, juts like in the games, was an interesting, yet awesome idea! :D Rock on!