Well, here goes nothing: Congratulations on the first draft. It needs some polishing, but you are off to a great start. I’m glad you have found the courage to head about a hobby. May you keep grinding away.

While I urge caution with things like content and legalities, and object to some of the language, I also urge all to make the different issues with the show known, couples and otherwise. This can be done in many ways, including by using the feedback option of the 'Other' category of the contact request page of The CW's website and by contacting DC Entertainment.

Be careful about things like content, language, and legalities. And all should make the issues with the show known. This can be done in a number of ways, including with the feedback option of the 'Other' section of the contact request forum of The CW's website and by contacting Warner Brothers and DC Entertainment.

Hey, just two things.
First one, the probably told you already but Caitlins eyes are hazelnut brown (kinda) and her hair is kind of a redish brown, though there are many debates 'bout that.
The second thing, I really think you should get someone to correct the text, specially the comas, there are quite a lot missing.
But other than that, I really enjoyed the story!;-)

You are aware that caitlen gets slightly frsoty ahem... seriously ita killer
Killer frost

I absolutely loved it! Completely brilliant!

Great story!

I love it! It could be that the part of the kiss more intense (Ya know what I mean)

Wow, your story is so awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yes, I want more one-shot and the continuation of this story. Please I need to live!
Update soon :)

This fics is beautiful, amazing, fantastic and great. Please continue it. I love Snowbarry and I wish there was more of that kiss only a little more intense.
Future Ideas: Wedding, honeymoon and pregnancy.

nice story except one thing Caitlin's hair is brown not blonde

Please make more there aren't a lot of stories for this couple and I agree with you I'm not on board with westallen it feels like iris is in love with the idea of flash not Barry himself and after the crossover episode I just love snowbarry