Oh ok sounds good thanks

Wow poor Harry on to the next chapter thanks

Looking for to the next chapter thanks

Holly cow poo

Oh my good start

Hmm I think this story has potential but needs some reworking. The writing is amateuristic and the plot line so far makes absolutely no sense. Harry is 13, not 5, he’s not going to suddenly go with a stranger who shows up claiming to be his father with a letter from his mother. Not only that but he’s been severely abused, he would distrust John, Sam, and Dean for a long time before he would trust them. Also Sam, Dean, and John just believing that Harry didn’t make a deal happened to quick and should be worked. Like I said, has potential but needs some realism added, it may be a fantasy genre but that doesn’t mean it should be completely unrealistic

This is quite an interesting story that I hope you get around to soon.

It has a lot of potential!

Write a new chapter here before erasing it. It will notice the reader to search for the new story.

Luna's Mom or other blonde?

psychic is Luna lovegood

i love ur book and van u plz update soon
Merry Christmas to you

OK, first wonderful story!
Second, could you write a story where harry is Crowley's son and he rescues him.
Third, why has Crowley to be bad?
Fourth, John was already dead when they met Crowley the 1st time. And since dumbeldork had harry literary in his hand, the deal dumbeldork made is already forfield. So whoever made the deal with him has hunting season on dumbeldork, no pun intended.

Luna? Or her mother?

Liked it hope dean and the others find Harry soon

please update