Cute! Really enjoyed this! 33

Aw so cute! The end.. so funny xD

Merry Christmas to me ;) Thank you so much for writing this. I wish you were a writer for the actual show, because this was beautiful. I'm so sad it had to end, though of course I look forward to reading more of your work.

Hehe Metatron reading gay fanfiction? I could totally see it.

Hahaha omg this is so perfect! I wish you'd continue, but at the same time, this is a really good way to end it as a one shot. Thanks!

Ha! Love this story! Hope you continue it!

I am fangirling so hard. They are just too cute for me to even handle. I am so excited to read more (assuming this is not a one-shot). Seriously, I'm sitting here reading this and giggling the whole time and it is 2 in the morning. I'm sure my family will be thrilled tomorrow.

XD haha this looks like it's gonna be great!