i am in tears reading this and hoping irish loves hannah like reck and pac

Heyo, Bladezz here.

I liked the story, I just finished a run trough BF4's main campaign on Hard difficulty and thought I'd search for some adaptations on Fanfiction. Not a lot was found, but hey, I found this.
Nice to see a somewhat romance going on, and some little tweaks to dialougue, but I did spot you foregoeing Irish's 'afraid of heights' moment in shanghai, or any mention to it in his dialogue.
And as much as I agree with you on Kovic's assesment, of how he's essensially dehumanized in the story, I did find his dialogue in the campaign a bit lighter than portrayed. One exaple is when the squad's in the RHIB on the way to the Titan where with the same 'Agent Kobitch' he responds more humerous.
But all-in-all; Great adaptation, looking forward to seeing more of your story.

Sincirely,
Max 'Bladezzkiller99' Colman, Novice Fanfiction reader.

PS: Could I make a somewhat more personal request? Dima always dies in all stories I've seen of BF4's campaign so far. Can you write it so he survives, but splits from the team? Thanks regardless if you implement it or not.

Alright, this chapter is written better than other stories I've seen and Recker isnt identical to the game version but female, no it is a version with an actual personality. GG bro

Awesome story.

D'aw, this chapter cut off at a really good part and it seems your journalist's job is taking up a lot of time. Hope you find some time to update this story with another chapter, it's not yet at the most intense part of Battlefield 4's plot!

It seemed a little rushed, as the scenes could've been a tad bit longer as in taking in shock from a Nimitz Class carrier sinking. But when you were forced to leave the sailors, I applaud that part. It affects you, and it's something you'll never forget in BF4 including watching them drown after they plead to you.

Awesomd story, keep it up I can't wait to read the rest.

You are making the game seem like a fanfic and I'm not joking!
Also I would prefer if my crate is loaded with a shitload of C4 and other explosives

The story is Looking good sir

Yup, scored my random out-of-the-blue weapon crates. Kicking ass now.

Anyway, this was a really awesome chapter although I noticed one typo. Instead of writing EMP (electromagnetic pulse) you wrote down EMT (electromagnetic tractor?). It was around the area where Jess and Pac along with Hannah entered the med bay to see the PRC president.

Hoorah for explosives! Gift of science. Hehe.

Anyway, yet another well-written addition to the fanfic. Good job Audrea! Magical weapons crate please. :P

Pretty good story so far

I really do like the direction of Jessaiya's and Pac's relationship. Keep working on it the same way you were! :D

This is an interesting take on the Battlefield 4 campaign, I admit. Never before have I thought about a gender-bent Sergeant Recker, and especially a sort of closer relationship with Sergeant Clayton Pakowski.

I'm impressed and I don't have really anything to pick on about. Keep up your work, you have my support.