Hell! What a way to end this story. Please end it!

Now to some errors to correct (nothing big) you have throughout the 'chapters'/scenes. Spelling errors. Please re-read your material. I am sure you will find the misspellings. A few I found; the w in Watchtower is capitalized (your writing about a specific place). E in the planet Earth is capitalized. You are talking about the planet. If you were talking about the ground or dirt then earth is correct. In a few places you have time for Tim. There are more but I will end here. The only thing I want to say (type) again; read, not spell check, your works. Spell check first but re-read. Spell check will only catch misspelled words but it will not catch wrong word(s) being used.

I love these! I NEED to know what happens.

Please pleaseeee, mind controlled dick vs the bat family!
I think he would win, easyly because he would not be carefull, he'll be destructive, intelligent etc etc, it would be interesiting

Do one where the justice league has to have a meeting at the manor but are interrupted my bruce's many children and get to see bruce acting all father-like (the newer members didn't know he was a dad and the ones that know didn't know he had so many children or that he was nice to them) btw thanks for updating please update soon!

the team meets the rest of the family,

Could you do a one shot where the Justic League and team are mind controlled and Robin takes them all out? Extras for if the two teams watch security footage when robin is recovering and don’t realise how amazing robin really is.

Maybe do a vacation based one or a prank war?

Aww, this chapter was so sweet! And I love it how you said both orphans laughed showing a bond between them. Others will say "and Dick and Bruce laughed" but the creativity of saying orphans instead doesn't bring out a sad aura around it, but an almost loving aura.

Loved it

"Dick is Bruce's biological father"? Don't you mean "Bruce is Dick's biological father"?

COMPLETE SPUNK

I know right
Best story ever

lol that was awesome! Poor Alfred!

Setting toast on fire...XD. lol. Bruce would probably set cereal on fire if he had it with him. Good job btw. I was cracking up.

That's just sad. Funny but sad. Sorry. Update soon please! Do Artemis part 2!