| Reviews for Cocoa with a dash of red |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/8 Hi yes I know this is old but I'd love to see Coco x Velvet x Ruby from you |
 OblivionKisame chapter 5 . 2/23 I feel like someone messing with Coco's girl would mean a death sentence p. |
| OblivionKisame chapter 3 . 2/23 Communication is Key on relationships. |
| OblivionKisame chapter 2 . 2/23 Coco you smooth bitch lol! |
| Sorablu12 chapter 1 . 7/18/2019 PLEASE BRING THIS BACK! |
| Alexis Serrath chapter 5 . 4/24/2019 Hnnnng. Loved it. You did a great job with this rarepair. |
| STRQ chapter 3 . 8/6/2017 oh, good, now it's an abusive relationship. |
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 5 . 8/3/2017 heh, nice and sappy |
| it's just another primate chapter 5 . 7/11/2017 Yosh! One of the cuter couples in the RWBY-verse. It was so cute. |
| BrownTeddyBear chapter 5 . 6/3/2017 I'm honestly surprised there wasn't a cliche situation at some point shortly after they started dating where people started to notice Ruby's new outfits. Sort of like: "Ruby, what's with the new outfit" or something along those lines, there's a reason I'm not a writer "My girlfriend picked it out for me" Chaos ensues. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2017 Just so you're aware, the tags got changed for RWBY characters and now your fic says it's a pairing of Ruby and Team CRDL. Just figured you might want the chance to properly update that. Especially since this is one of the few Chocolate Milk stories one this site and it is also really good. |
| KawaiiKweenKentia chapter 5 . 8/13/2016 only complain is i wish it was longee mabey a part 2 but the story was so good |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/31/2016 This was a pretty good story. I am going to go read your others now, tata! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/31/2016 It's just like my girlfriend and me fighting, except without words and with physical violence. Even got the "Kiss'em Then Smack'em" right. |
| Misslieness chapter 5 . 3/15/2016 This was an okay story, though I feel that you did not flesh out Coco nearly enough. You played on her strenths (fashion, sassy) but that was also the extent of her personality really. In order to flesh her out and make her less painfully arch-typical Coco, you could've included complementing or even contradictory traits/interests to get that sense of her being a complex individual. For example, I like reading, dislike movies, dislike outdoors yet I enjoy gardening and jogging on early mornings. The tea drinking did count, but the fashion show felt too predictable. The fight with Torchwick and subsequent kidnapping felt like a too sudden change of tone to the story, where I had previously enjoyed the lighthearted aspect. It's not a problem of there being action in of itself, but it felt sudden, tacked on and like an afterthought. Other than that, I enjoyed the sweet comments and flirting between them. |
