Reviews for No Gryffindor |
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![]() ![]() 'The best action is inaction'. Pretty sure this quote came from somewhere, but I can't for the life of me recall the source. Also, who in their right mind would dare interfere when everything would all end up swell and fine anyway? I certainly don't. But then again, I'm a mild version of Peter Pettigrew, so I'm not one to talk. I reviewed, yay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is outstanding! And the last paragraph is perfect! Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Much more realistic. I like it a lot. It feels honest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your SI has more common senses than most of the characters in the book combined. It's not her war, and it's amoral to force the untrained children to fight anyway. |
![]() ![]() So cute make more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked your story! It was a bit frustrating, I cannot help feeling like any other usual SI protagonist and wanting to at least meet Harry, the teachers, and see Hogwarts... But you knew what you were doing and you put it accross expertly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. I would have gotten the heck out of there to if it was me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite nice! Though I would've loved to see more of Lavender's time with ASMS, and there was this hope for me to see Lavender desperately trying to make herself scarce because she saw one of the characters XD that would be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this, finally an SI that think outside the box and don't try to become a hero or some shit.. cuz if I was in her shoes is either I try to woo the hotties (which is impossible) or just go outside the Britain to another country.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Getting the hell out of Great Britain is a much saner choice than going to Hogwarts, in such a situation. I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How amusing. Actually would like to see Lav forge and relationship with Hermione since in canon Hermione only female friend is Ginny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not what I expected, but brilliant all the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice little story, though the SI's escape seemed a little too easy. I'd have been tempted to have a downer ending, like Hermione or Ronald die in the final battle. But I liked how you handled it all the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a nice change of pace from every SI I've read. Even some normal OC stories have to make them change /something/, and I like that not everything turned upside down because of the "Butterfly Effect". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice :) |