I LOVE THIS, I could read this to go to bed. Thank you

I hope you complete this story. It is sooo good and enjoy it immensely.

Mk so I'm taking a stab at the new sins.

Greed: Elsa
Envy: Madelyn
Sloth: Ahsoka
Wrath: A2

Lust: Haven't played FF15 so leaning towards Sarah based on description.

Gluttony: Honestly don't know based on the hints but the only one that come to mind is Larxene though I think it's wrong and I'm saying that cause my assumption is based on how shes a blond with daggers and was seen in the manga eating a bunch of chicken.

Pride: Maleficent and her merry band of Duchesses

Those are my predictions, beside that I read the review an just wanna say that, yes I am Satan, I do play and love the Gummi Ships in the games but not KH2(it's hands down the worst for me).

Only problems with KH3's is that custom ships suck compared to the constellation ships and you pretty much need one for getting the best one in the game which just nukes everything.

So yeah representing the Gummi Street Crew if ya haven't heard.

This was definitely better than KHIII’s Arendelle.

if you never update this again, I will be very upset.

dead story...

I remember this. I enjoy reading this so much! I love it! Miss it! Can't wait for more of it!

stealing that jinx

Hilariously this isn't far from what Kingdom Hearts III did, albeit in a much shorter time frame

So Donald is cheating on Daisy with Mary and Daisy is cheating on Donald with Goofy the more you know

just to fuck with ya "You Suck because of X Y ZGuest"

That's sum gud shiet

So will you be continuing this story as well? At over 200k words it would be a shame to let all this fall by the wayside. While I have no doubt that the rage edition will be just as good (probably even better) it just doesn't sit well to leave this unfinished. All the time developing the characters and build towards the eventual climax of the story.

Lovin this stoy, I haven't been leaving reviews because I've been binging it but seeing the "kingdom hearts is a narrative nightmare" part of the author's note reminded me of a quote from a youtuber who had played through all of KH recently, "9/10, it sucks" XD

KH3's story... There was one thing that was bugging me about the ending, apart from no explanation about how Sora learned the Attraction Commands, I thought they'd be unlocked through a Disney Town area. BUT the ending - We see the Boy in White and the Boy in Black talking about the Ancient Keyblade War and the Lost Masters, yeah? Problem is, they were talking about this ON SCALA AD CAELUM, the place that was shattered during the Ancient Keyblade War and the Fragments becoming all other Worlds!

Also, if it wasn't for KH Chi and the Master of Masters, Lost Masters, Book of Prophecy etc, they could have ended EVERYTHING right here, with a Temporal Causality Loop. The Ancient Keyblade War took place on Scala ad Caelum, just like this one, a clash between Light and Darkness for Kingdom Hearts, just like this one, and ending with survivors of that War going missing, just like Sora and Riku go missing from their World.