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Awesome! Absolutely amazing. Your detailed simplicity, if that’s a thing, is exactly what was needed to keep the story going at a pleasing pace. I like that there wasn’t any unnecessary filler, and everything served a purpose. Thanks for sharing such a well-written piece of wonderful.

i loved it. i also enjoyed your writing style iread very well. please put me on your notification list so i know when you have a new story out.

I really like this so far! Keep writing love all the variations from the original. :)

Good writing. Enjoyed reading it

Such a cute story!

I liked your story a lot is there anymore to the story as I would to know if they get back together or if they get married & have any more children or if they just friends with benefits I would love to know here it finishes .
thank you for a very good story
Stephen Brooker

This is an AWESOME story! I have been looking for a story like this for a long time!

I liked the story except the last chapter, not for what it contains, rather an obstruction to the flow of the storyline. Excluding the last chapter (where I think you could've ended it), it was great.

Love your story it is one of the best stores I have read in a very long time is this the finish our will you be updating it so we can find out if they get married & have any more children I would love to know because the way it is you have left it up in the air no real finish
Thanz for a very good story so far
P.S. If you are going to update it please contact me

Stephen Brooker

Very enjoyable took the best elements of Jane and made a brest arrow story

Well, it took forever thanks to real life and the holidays but I managed to read here and there and now I'm done!

Great story! Loved that it had the happy ending?, although it looked for a moment like it wouldn't. Glad there was some peace for Felicity in her relationship with her father. Birth or no birth, I don't know that I could have been that forgiving.

Anyway, loved loved loved it! Looking forward to starting a new one. My resolution is to read more often and comment :D Happy new year to you and your readers!

There's a show on netflix cLled Jane the Virgin and it is EXACTLY like this story. The only difference is the name and race. I read this first so obviously I feel like they stole it from your or something...

I absolutely LOVED this story. It was fantastic:)

Thank you for this wonderful journey. I loved that I never knew what was coming next. You brought me so many smiles and laugh out louds. I will miss getting your updates.
thank you!