Love this one!

It's a great short story. You can see the 11th and 12th doctors are sorry for what happened and hope to make amends with Jack/Malcom

That is absolutely my favorite crossover ever, because ever since Malcolm came back from being supposedly dead I thought it must be because he's Jack.

I'd love to read more on this if you ever decide to add to it.

I haven't even seen Arrow and I think I'm gonna cry-! This was so good! And a good point that even Jack could have gotten to a place where he became the bad guy, sad as it is. D:

Great story! I've been looking for something like this for a while!

Love it!

I really loved the story I just keep coming back to read it again I really hope you wil write more

Wonderful story, Jack is one my favorite characters. You tied in his immortality perfectly with Malcolm Merlyn, and starting to turn back into Jack. The Doctor dropping Jacks coat off with Thea was perfect. Bravo! An encore is needed.

"You've got this thing on your face, it looks like a smile," :)

Really great story. I mean really really great. I've always imagined that Malcolm would be an older Jack and that of course he would have change after Ianto's death. I especially like the last bit were 'Malcolm' changed his appearance back to 'Jack' and then ran off to show it Thea. I'd like to think that there could be a nice sequel for this. You know, one where Thea meet Martha and Gwen and where Malcolm meets up with the Doctor again.

good story

This was awesome!

YOU KILLED ME! YOU JUST KILLED ME

This is one of the best crossover stories I have read for these two fandoms. And I'm not ashamed to admit I got a little teary-eyed

What a neat way to do this! I kept finding out weird to see 'Jack' as a bad guy but, when explained this way, it makes sense and it's cool.