Reviews for Fall |
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hachoos chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 Guess who's crying? |
Saphira113 chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 This story was great! |
ZophToko chapter 6 . 5/15/2017 kataraDo u need some help?TophNo u pervert. Go look at ur own |
Luakil chapter 1 . 1/20/2017 That was stupendously refreshing. To see an author that did their research on the original story and add on to it while retaining the original's essence creating a strange new mix of a story that invokes euphoria. Well done, I applaud you |
MindlessAbandon chapter 17 . 12/24/2016 Aw. That was absolutely beautiful. Zuko is so thoughtful with his gifts. Their first time together after the wedding was incredibly sweet. And ending it with that remark from Toph about them being married is just cherry on top of a beautiful cake. I truly had a lot of fun reading this story. It was very enjoyable. Thank you so much! |
Firewolves16 chapter 17 . 12/24/2016 Aw, i love this. And the whole "Fight me" thing was hilarious. Toph was so in character, i love her to death. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 16 . 12/24/2016 These two are just adorable. Their bickering was so cute. That bit with the girls giving Toph advice was funny. The boys and Iroh were funny too. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 15 . 12/24/2016 Ursa is a puzzling character, Toph is right with being unsure about her. But I liked their interactions in this chapter. Always nice to read how soft Toph could be with a child. And Iroh is a welcome character too. I'm so excited for their wedding. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 14 . 12/24/2016 Toph's parents are such big bullies. I wanted to slap their mouths shut. That was emotional. Zuko and Toph handled it well. Them being supportive of each other is so nice. That bit at the end with them talking about their future is so adorable. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 13 . 12/24/2016 Aww. Their reunion was so sweet. Toph's feelings for Zuko was so nice to read. This was a great chapter. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 12 . 12/24/2016 This was funny. Oh Zuko. And another dragon. Nice. I'm excite to see what's next. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 11 . 12/24/2016 I didn't think Toph would go and talk it out with Zuko's family but that was nice. And now there's a dragon. Interesting. Toph is stalling but this seems like a great plot point. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 10 . 12/24/2016 Poor Zuko but it made sense for Toph to do that. I wonder what she's up to. Zuko trusting her was a big thing. This was lovely one. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 9 . 12/24/2016 OH YES! great chapter! I love their banter. This was so nice. Thank you. |
MindlessAbandon chapter 8 . 12/24/2016 This was a good chapter. Not much happened but it was still good. Toph and Zuko is such a powerful pair. I'm excited to see how they'll go on as leaders. Thank you. |