Reviews for Not as Grim (up for adoption) |
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ensgavin chapter 2 . 5/3 second time reading this and I'm still absolutely stunned at the writing in it. thank you! |
Nonyaarb chapter 4 . 3/12 Good old misplaced aggression |
ShadowWolf223 chapter 11 . 2/18 Interesting crossover concept. |
ButterBeep chapter 10 . 1/22 This entire chapter was absolutely disgusting. I hate it when people think that it's okay to force anyone to do anything. Even if it's just to pick an outfit, which he doesn't even need because he's just going to transform. You're seriously just going to add that part about the copies of the girls outfits and treat it as a joke. There is something seriously wrong with you. Nothing in this chapter was okay. Gross. Disgusting. Abhorrent. |
jcheriscar chapter 4 . 11/4/2019 Weiss you're such a bitch loving The Story So Far keep it up |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2018 Lmaooooooo Danny just can’t catch a break, can he? Lolololol riperonis |
Naruhaku96 chapter 8 . 11/23/2018 Shouldn't lionheart be at haven, as their headmaster? I know this isn't in volume 5, cuz phyrra died in volume 3, unfortunately. And we haven't met Sun, Neptune, Neo, Penny, Emerald or Mercury yet. |
Crazyotakugirl123 chapter 1 . 9/14/2017 is it ok if i adopt this |
GokuBlack chapter 1 . 8/13/2017 I will adopt, if thats okay? |
GokuBlack chapter 5 . 8/11/2017 But i can try |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2017 I would love to adopt this story, but i dont think i can |
Ehh chapter 10 . 7/29/2017 Wrong. Jade is both a girls and boys name. In the 1990's it was apparently in the top 1000 most popular boys names. But yeah, it is more commonly recognized as a girl's name. Although Blake can also be both a boys and girls name, so you would think she would be a little more thoughtful about it. Or how about Sam? Man's name, but Samantha isn't. Seriously, people would probably put a little more thought into it. Also, they heard his voice right? Does that sound feminine at all? I doubt it. I'm probably thinking too hard on this. |
lalaland chapter 4 . 7/8/2017 it's not "Ms. Placed Aggression" it's "Misplaced Aggression" |
Amber chapter 16 . 6/4/2017 Hi, I dont know if you will even read this but Id still like to comment on your story. I found it very interesting and fun to read, the dynamics between the characters were well written and felt quite realistic. I know that you said that you wont be writing anymore fanfics but I do hope you continue writting in any kind of way. To have the ability to put your thoughts on paper is one to treasure and one you can keep improving. Hopefully you continue your life doing what you like best and I wish you luck. Best of wishes, Amber Regts (from the Netherlands) |
ivanganev1992 chapter 9 . 5/4/2017 Ch 9 for ch 16 So it was blawn Ghost World with streght to Rival at Least Juubi or other Primoral Deity of Chaos Azeroth or Azeroth . Or the Guardian of the Gate of the Multiversal Gates . And was the energy amplified or Diluted Natural Energy to do that with Dust as Catalisator amplifier which is equal doing The Ninhas from the Naruto world as the both combined. |