That was really cute! I'm glad I read it. You write Daxter and Jak's relationship very well, in my opinion. Also I love Daxter in this. He just kind of rambles on and no one but Jak really know why. It's great, cute, and short. Thanks for writing it!

Awwww this is really cute so far. I like how you write the two of them interacting. It makes me happy. I think I'll keep on reading this then.

Oh that was a sweet story. I wish there was a story where Jak never lost his sweet self when he'd come to Haven.

This is utterly beautiful! I have tears in my eyes, it so sweet. Those boys deserve some time off.

Aww this is so cute!

I love this! The ending is perfect, especially with the line, "Jak looked up at the blue sky through the leaves, for once, incredibly grateful for everything he had experienced. It made his memories of Sandover that much more precious and special to him." Beautiful story :)

This fic is awesome! I love how you write mute Jak. There is not enough of that on this site. Daxter is fantastic. Great job and fav for you _

I am just really loving this. I love how Daxter can read Jak without him saying a word. You portray their friendship so perfectly! I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Yay, another chapter! I am loving this and I can't WAIT for another _

Ermergerd this is so cute! Dax is so adorable worrying over Jak :)