| Reviews for Flickering Flames of Betrayal |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/9 GET GOOD OFF MA'AM |
| Incognito chapter 1 . 4/9 I'm a be honest not half bad for the first chapter |
 Theplanismassive chapter 1 . 4/7 Not gonna lie I cried |
| Someone chapter 3 . 4/1 Isn’t it “ Fire dragon roar “ not Roar of the fire dragon |
| jackyfloresq2001 chapter 6 . 5/6/2019 can't wait for the next chapter in this story |
| EmperorRevan chapter 1 . 3/4/2019 Its promising, however the writing needs improvement. Simply a few more comas or "..." to help with pacing. Also, dialogue from different characters is supposed to be in different paragraphs. You can't have two different characters dialogue in the same paragraph. Otherwise it looks good. |
| Some guy2283 chapter 6 . 7/17/2018 I don't know if you plan to continue this story or not. But If you did, I have a suggestion for a chapter. How about a chapter from Erza's perspective? showing the guilt that's eating away at her mind. About her having to come to terms with what she had done. If she will that is. I see a lot of potential in this story for it to go to waste. You are a talented author, and I look forward to your future work! |
| pyromancer88 chapter 6 . 6/19/2018 I know it's been a while but this story deserves to be finished it's too good to be abandoned now. anyway this is possibly one the best none Nalu fanfics I've read in a while your one in a million my friend one in a million |
| End my life chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 love it |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/8/2018 Update please |
| A guy chapter 6 . 1/2/2018 For the love of god and everything that is holy PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! It's the best one I've read in ages and I've been coming back to it for a full YEAR hoping it would be updated. If you are busy I understand though. |
| EtheriousLogia chapter 6 . 9/10/2017 Oooo’mmmmmmmgggrgrgrururururur y u no updateeeeeeeeee :( |
| PureHylian chapter 6 . 7/25/2017 I really enjoyed this story, and I would love it if you continued it. Even though the last update was 2 years ago. P.S I'm a big fan of your stories |
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 6 . 7/13/2017 Interesting. Good job :) |
| Aine chapter 6 . 3/22/2017 Great fic! update as soon as possible please! |
