Reviews for Aang's injury |
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YeetThePanda chapter 1 . 6/27 This story was cute, but it was a little rushed. Maybe Aang could have just got him memory back but the “I love you” part is a little too much. Make him blush super hard or something. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 Used a few too many full stops which made the storys flow a little awkward. Also, try be a little creative with your words, for example, you used "said" and the likewise a lot in a repetitive manner. Other than those little things, a really cute story, thank you :) |
Soaring Amethyst chapter 1 . 1/31/2015 The story was cute but I just feel that it was a bit rushed |
AlchemistLyn chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 Aww. So cute! |
fanatla chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 Beatiful story. Very romantic. Thank you. |