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   sally rally chapter 4 . 7/17/2018 Soooo sweet. |
| Evie1205 chapter 4 . 11/1/2016 Beautiful! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/26/2015 good story |
| AMCPrincess chapter 4 . 4/29/2015 Great story! |
| TheFenixFDX chapter 4 . 3/20/2015 Very cute story, wasn't expecting the Marry Me. I love stories that make me smile. Great job! |
| Joan chapter 4 . 3/17/2015 Great little story. Loved it. |
| angelaashu2 chapter 1 . 3/8/2015 Nice story I forgot to review so I'm doing it now |
| Lktwh13 chapter 4 . 3/7/2015 I can't believe I hadn't read this one! SO GREAT! Off to read the sequel! :-D |
| EnterpriseCaptain7 chapter 4 . 1/3/2015 Wow! What a sweet, moving story! Loved it! Loved how Jane just blurted out " marry me". It was perfect! Keep up the good work! |
| 99pa42 chapter 4 . 12/28/2014 More please. it's amazing so far and a crime not to continue |
| RestlessSoul03 chapter 4 . 12/28/2014 I loved this story, a sequel would be amazing. |
| joann chapter 4 . 12/23/2014 More chapters please |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/22/2014 Well, good luck w/finals. Are your J&M young adults? Just starting at their jobs as D&ME? Maybe in their late 20s? Not the age of the show? So Jack is the daddy but J didn't show/mention/hint her emotion 4 M when they were dating till the revelation of pregnacy? Maybe missed something in chapters 1&2? If you mentioned it, that's my bad. Thank you 4 sharing your story. It just seem so sudden w/the proposal & the onset of feelings. A Bostonian Fan. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 Please please please continue. I wanna see what the family's reaction is going to be like. So good. So very very good. Love it. |
| laura chapter 4 . 12/22/2014 Pleaseeeee continúe this history! I love it! |
