Kushina: DONT YOU DARE KURAMA!

Okay that bit with Lin and Shukaku is always funny especially after Naruto said Shukaku was the one they needed to worry about. OH! If Naruto could still do Summoning maybe Gamakichi would help drive the point for everyone to calm down.

just read this, and it is awesome. if this gets responded to, can you tell me what the Rewrite's title is, or if it's this one, how much was rewritten? I would love to see how this plays out.

Looking forward to reading more chapters soon. It's pretty good so far!

It was a nice touch to compare the Avatar to a Jinchuriki, since the consequences of harming/capturing them will undoubtedly be the same.

"I'm only pregnant!" Sounds like Pema alright, lol.

I know that you only wrote it for comedic purposes, and that it shouldn't be looked into too deeply, but I still think that it's kind of weird for Kurama to know the idea of Satan. Sure, they probably have their version of the Devil, but Satan probably isn't one of them. Again, I know that it was there for just comedic value, but even little details like that for casual comedy is noticed.

Also, you should've had Pema scream with an "eek!" That kind of scream is more warranted for, say, when a woman sees a strange animal in her house, especially when she has her children in the same building.

Given Korra's personality, I think you got down her reaction to Naruto's story pretty well. Nice!

Loving their interactions and their second act of heroism so far. Given their personalities, it seems like a match made in heaven.

Please do work on the grammar though, especially since you seem to use commas in an incorrect manner.

First of all, I think you started to write the intro a little too quickly. Actually, the entire chapter seemed to be a bit rushed, since it goes to the next scene rather quickly. Since it is fanfiction, it's not exactly bad to do so, but I think some people would notice it.

Additionally, it would be a good idea to bold Kurama's (as well as any other supernatural entities) text when he speaks. Sure, you don't have to, but to me it seems rather appropriate to do so.

Also, I would think that Korra would ask him "how" he's standing on the wall, not "why."

Other than that, it is quite interesting so far.

love this story. i am wondering when re-written will come out. also if make it naruto x korra small harem?

Do you still plan to rewrite this story? If so is there a General idea of when it'll be published? I don't want to sound like I'm being pushy or anything, sorry if it comes out like that, I'm just curious.

i wont lose hope for this fic

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I really wish this continued, this is so awesome

A shame thus hasn't been updated in nearly a year, it's pretty entertaining.