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Aw! This was too cute.

The fluffiness of this was too much for me to handle, it was just amazing!

What a wonderful fanfiction

Usually I don't like jaunexWeiss ships, but this one seemed...realistic. And I liked it. Good job on this story!

ohhh so cute

mmmm nice

Glad to see this is getting another chapter!

i like this :):):):): its a good thing that you didnt leave it as a one shot :), keep up the good work

I look forward to the next chapter of this story

Almost perfect... Except for the fact that canon Weiss loved Winter. It's her favorite season according to Kara

Houh? Nice inversion of a metaphor you have here. Glad you decided to continue this

Awww how adorable _

really great story i do feel the emotion in there, but remember try to make the characters some what relate-able or else it becomes kinda... well soap operay. More emotion is good but don't make it really corny like using nick-names or using a metaphor every other sentence. Sometimes being straight and direct is better than taking 3 extra sentences to say "i like her because she reminds me of winter". But other than that keep up the good writing the grammar and spelling and prefect and the dialogue is fun and interesting.

On a final note, don't exaggerate and make your character sound like a creepy stalker, i mean i understand crushes. but keeping track of how many times she froze him? that's kinda going to far, also i don't think wiess would do that to a person or would jaune still like her if she actually did that to him.

I hope this doesn't discourage you from continuing your writing cause i think you have great talent, i just wanted to voice my opinion on how you can improve your story and make it one of the best on FF D

Very well done from Jaune's POV.

The real challenge now will be writing from Weiss' POV.