Reviews for His Witch
hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
just love it, it's just a great story
HA chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
I'm disappointed in myself for not knowing of this pairing. ;)
Emmeebee chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
Haha, Sirius would so totally encourage him. Seeing them interact in peacetime just makes the knowledge of what happened in canon even worse. I've never really been one for this pairing, but I like how you've depicted them here.
losthpfanficwriter chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
Nice fic! There was definitely something between them.
wujy chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
Well, you definitely bring the reader in right off at the beginning. I was captured in the first sentence, and drawn into it. This isn't a pairing I think much about, just because I don't really think about Tonks often. The only thing I'd say is that it didn't end with as much intrigue. I felt a little empty, like I wanted more, but it was cute.
Laser Lance 720 chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
Okay. There are now weird images in my head from this. I can't stop seeing that last scene. This is a very strange pairing indeed, I can't deny that, but it was still pretty awesome. You made it work so well. The pacing was amazing. Harry turning to Sirius and Remus for advice was a brilliant move (did I detect a bit of Wolfstar?).
alyssialui chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Unexpected pairing. I don't know how I feel about it. If anyone belongs with Tonks, it's Remus or Charlie.
I did like Harry seeking advice from Sirius and Remus and their 'shared' look before mentioning the silencing charm (from personal experience). A nice little drabble
Lara1221 chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
I could actually see this happening :) I /love/ the bit with Sirius and Remus, hysterical :D She and Harry could definitely make a cute couple, I think, and I think Harry was in character this whole time, and his thoughts were really sweet. Nice job!
public static void chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Awesome! I had never thought of them as a couple before, but you made them work perfectly. I remember those moments from the movies but never thought about them like this. It's really a great characterization for Tonks and Harry in so little words.
Sirius' advice was a nice detail, and I just loved the last paragraph.
Ralinde chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
I have to admit that out of the five stories you have submitted for the Fan Faves this month, this is my least favourite. I felt that it was too rushed and I missed the characterisations that made the other stories so great to read.

However, having done several of the Wild Pairings myself, I understand the time pressure and the word limit can makes things a bit difficult at times.

I did like the mentioning of the glancing in the beginning, they could be the start of something (as it is here). I also liked the short mention of Tonks/Charlie because they are about the same age and I could actually see the two of them together. The advise about the Silencing Charms that Sirius gives him in the end, seemed like a really Sirius thing to say. (You just /had/ to sneak in WolfStar, didn't you? ;-))
CUtopia chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
... O.o Oh my, I need to get these pictures out of my head... :D ;) It would be nearly the same as Remus and Tonks, only reversed, but still I... nah... I don't think I will be growing fond of this Pairing ;)
This was well written and you managed to describe this unusual pairing in a good way, in a way that makes one believe that it could happen.
I also liked that you made Harry quite uncomfortable at first, as it fits him and also the situation of having a crush on a older woman - Also the advice Sirius gave was so much like him ;) :D
A really nice drabble, and even though it was awkward I enjoyed reading it :)
singing-along chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
This was really sweet! Now you mention it, those instances in the movie really were pretty cute.
The flow was good. The first paragraph was just beautiful, what with the alternating descriptions between flying and concentration and how beautiful Tonks was. The part about Remus and Sirius made me laugh and of course, the ending XD
DarkIceAngelFlare chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
Wow, this was written as a speed drabble? It was done wonderfully! Your SPaG was perfect! I kind of like this pairing now, after reading this. I love Sirius' advice (so IC) and the connection of Quidditch (or broom-riding) between the first part and the last part was really thoughtful. Well done!
The Crownless Queen chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Interesting pairing, and not one I see often :p It kind of makes me want to watch those movies again to check out those 'shared looks' you talk about ;)
This was kind of cute too. I liked the way Harry ended up asking for advice from Sirius, though I'm not so sure Harry would so easily be attracted to someone he's told has a crush on the BWL... Though considering Ginny that may not be so OOC for him :p
And I also liked that this was so light-hearted and happy ;)
Cheers!
AzureSoulReaper chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
i really love this. i admit i have several pairings i love for harry but for tonks it was mostly only harry or sirius. yours is my much higher favorite one. i feel that you rushed the end a bit but quite good overall it should probably have had about three more sentences about how they got together in a different way more like a few regular dates first then the parts you have here and it would have felt more natural ending.
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