Great story about the MasterMind. I love how he goes mad with power, although he should have died sooner (MasterMinds can only control 3 units before starting to overload. But I guess it wouldn't have been much of a story if he overloaded too soon).
I also love the GatlingTanks opinion on it.

Heres the qoutes of the Gattling Tank: gun barels cooled and ready, start up the wizzers, how bout a shell shower, let the bullets fly, lets clear the air, i love the smell of gunpowder, lets take the guns for a spin.

Master Mind: i am the master mind, the mind is a tarrable thing to whast, this will be painless, lets collect our thougths, come in to the fold, your mind will be a blast and the most annoying one: BRAINWAVE OVERLOAD *boom*

my fav is Yuri Prime: there is only one true Yuri.

Cool! Philosophy and character neatly contained in a common problem taken from the games itself. The overload function was the most annoying part about the Masterminds.

Neat stuff here, moving from the person's pride to his desire for power. Very nice. Did something like this happen in the O'Hara story or was the reference just the thing at the beginning.

And here's another line, "I love the smell of gunfire!"

Being a trendsetter on is something I'll recall proudly to my grandchildren. Bailing that, this story is beautiful, simply beautiful.

Hey, just b/c most don't review doesn't mean we don't read! But hey man, I've read all 3 of your stories, and ALL of them were extremly good, you should also continue this because it does provide an intresting idea on the past of each of these characters. I'll also read your Halo stories, cause that's one of my favorite games as well.

Whoa, that was quite good. You really got into the mind of the, well, Mastermind.

Here's another quote for the Gattling tank: "Let's take the guns for a spin!"