very good

Awesome Story LOVED IT! Nailed the characters!

GOT Him! I love Abby's recounting of the Evidence. Now all that is left is to tighten the noose around his neck.

Nothing slips by Data: Clues, Evidence, Testimony or the Shocking Revelations.

The Turning of the Screw - and nobody can screw a suspect better than Leroy Jethro Gibbs!

Oh, Abby, you SO have him wrapped around your little finger - and you're going to have something else wrapped around him later. You Go - Girl!

Wow, 15 Chapters into your Murder Mystery and suddenly a new (and better) Motive is revealed. I can't wait to find out what happens when they pursue this one.

"I want to see a Klingon sized hole in any door you have to get through."
Great!

This Mystery is so great, but I still want to read more of the women's stories. I have the feeling they would be like 'Sex in the City' coffee shop convos on steroids.

I love how you integrate Enterprise, NCIS and Next Generation into a cohesive whole and present such believable characters. I can believe the shows could link together, and that NCIS Agents could be walking the decks of the Enterprise.

It's incredible the way you blend NCIS and Trek together into a seamless Murder Mystery that both confounds and is consistent with the methods and technology of both series. The clues are doles out in reasonable order, neither too many nor too few, allowing us to work out the killer and his/her motive along with the characters. Super kudos.
Oh, and the way you were consistent with the characters, perfect!

Well done. I really loved this story.

You did a very good job melding the NCIS characters into the TNG universe. What's most notable is you tweaking the NCIS characters to where they fit into the 24th century but are still recognzable as the people we know from the show.

Hi, I immensely enjoyed the mingling between STTNG & NCIS. The case was well developed, I enjoyed the investigating teams! Thanks and cheers!

I enjoyed this unofficial crossover between NCIS and Star Trek-The Next Generation. In fact I wouldn't mind seeing more of NCIS's future counterparts. Certain members of S FCIS are a little more fun than their 21st Century analogs.
That being said, I don't see the difference between the final chapter of Judgment on Risa posted today, and, the original final chapter.

Loved the end!