Reviews for Familiar of Blood |
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koseta.a chapter 3 . 1/28 Wtf... Dracul wouldn't be acting so stupid and submissive to humans period yet alone children |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/14/2018 You should include in your summary that this is AU and potential yuri. |
Jebest4781 chapter 10 . 12/3/2018 this was pretty fun. can't wait to see what else you'll do next |
Mythfan chapter 10 . 12/3/2018 Brilliant work. |
J the Abarekiller chapter 9 . 7/12/2018 WHAT!? WHAT THE F #K!? |
J the Abarekiller chapter 6 . 7/11/2018 I take back what I said about Chapter 4 this fanfic is awesome. Gabriel is awesome. Thought things kinda escalated a bit too quickly I must say. |
J the Abarekiller chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 I may have given Chapter 4 shit but if there is one thing that will keep me coming back, its Gabriels characterization. I just hope isn't completely out of character allot of the time |
J the Abarekiller chapter 4 . 7/11/2018 Ok no, I'm sorry but no. Gabriel should not have had as much trouble as he is having here. Allot of my interest for this story has just completely gone down the drain. First of all, Dracula is the most overpowered THING in the Lords of Shadow series and to see him getting his ass kicked, for the most part anyway, is just insulting. I may not be as big a fan of the Lords of Shadow series like other people, but even I can see that you f #ked up royally with this fight and the power scaling. Secondly, I hate how you tried to give Guiche the Badass treatment. I hated Guiche in the series, he was one of my least favorite characters and seeing him act like a boss just doesn't work. Guiche should've been a coward and should've stayed as a coward. I hate to shit on your work here, but I am a critic first and foremost, but I am also a fan who wants certain characters to be who they should be, so I can't sugar code anything here. |
Shahzeb chapter 9 . 1/26/2018 Gabriel is a very prideful person he wouldn't tolerate any of this shit and Louise Yuri is seeming forced you could add some development before just stating that she is now attracted to this person anyway thanks for the read |
Jebest4781 chapter 9 . 7/15/2017 enjoyed the chapter and good luck on the coming ones |
Jebest4781 chapter 8 . 7/15/2017 this is doing well so far. |
Jebest4781 chapter 7 . 7/15/2017 well this was fun and can't wait for more |
Jebest4781 chapter 6 . 7/15/2017 seems Zobek has arrived. wonder what else you'll do to make things unique |
Jebest4781 chapter 5 . 7/15/2017 wonder what you'll do next |
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 7/15/2017 well this is going to be fun and enjoyed it a lot |