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Anonymous Reader chapter 1 . 12/24/2014 The story is good, but please be careful and watch your grammar properly.. For example : "blablabla" I say, into "blablabla" I said. Past tense. And for "safe and OK" is actually more into "safe and sound" Also watch for your paragraph.. That's all from me, I guess.. :) |