Reviews for Maybe |
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RukiYuki chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 Soooooo sweet |
Meryu-chan chapter 1 . 5/14/2016 AaaWwww~~~It's so cute! *_* |
JoTerry chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 This is nice. Sequel? :D |
KICK UR ASS chapter 1 . 6/26/2015 LOVED IT! hope u write many more,if u dont, d hollows will get ... |
timc0212 chapter 1 . 6/14/2015 I like one-shot AU stories like this - decent writing, nice concept, to the point, and no crazy characterisations. |
rukiapeahberry chapter 1 . 1/16/2015 Love itttttt!. I can say for sure that this is one of my top 5 Favorite Fanfics!. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2014 KYAAAAAAAAAA AAW |
Azalea Airys chapter 1 . 12/24/2014 Awesome! |
blissbeat chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 The way you writing this story was so cute... I cant stop smiling while reading it... Hopefully it will continue... |
hopelessromantic chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 *singing* lucky I'm in love with my best friend... |
hunterofcomedy chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 It was sweet. Very fluffy, which I'm not personally a huge fan of, but it was well done and I enjoyed the sweetness of it. The only thing I would kind consider distracting would be the exposition on Rukia's background. It's not really needed because it never comes up again afterward. If her status or brother came up again in the story, it would be founded but here, it's more of a distraction until we get to the main event. Just saying that Byakuya had to leave and she went to Ichigo's is enough. You could make a little scene about her remembering meeting Ichigo and fitting in a bit of her past into there while she's heading to his house but even then it needs to be subtle and light. Don't get me wrong, the background story wasn't bad, just not needed since it didn't impact the story much. We get that best friends sometimes fall in love and so, the background isn't needed for it and can be condensed. Anyway, I did love the story and think you did a fantastic job of it. Great job! |
rushiii chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 I knew it would end up like that! XD |